|Reviews for Torn|
| YaoiBatman chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
Oh, stupid stupid Chas. You should have just stayed with John.
| kneekole chapter 6 . 6/28/2011
I DEMAND AN UPDATE.
WHIP OUT SOME MIND MAPS AND GET WRITING. 3
| Semjaza chapter 6 . 5/24/2011
Oh no! Poor Chas! I think his own good-nature got him into this mess more than anything else. John has to save him, please! I demand it, lol. Good job, and update soon please! :D
| Semjaza chapter 5 . 4/16/2011
This is a great chapter. The interaction between Chas and John was fascinating; I would love to read more of their conversations. I think you did a good job with their more sexual scenes, even if the lead-up to it might have been a bit rushed, it was still interesting. I know you skipped over the 'real slash' but as this story is rated T, anything else would have had to up the rating to M anyway, lol. I like how you ended it, with Chas still torn (yay!) between John and the demon lover. Good stuff, please update soon! :D
| Semjaza chapter 4 . 4/6/2011
Great chapter! I like the interaction between Chas and John here, and I love how you've explained the backstory. I must find out what Chas does next, lol, so please update soon! :D
| DarknessIsTheUniverse chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
Oh dear so Jack really is a demon! Nice twist with His Connection to John, now i Hope He really likes chaz and isnt just playing him? Looks like chaz will have to go Talk to him- if He Dares :-) Great chapter, Hope to See more soon!
| kneekole chapter 4 . 3/31/2011
finally got around to reading all the chapters;
& you better keep updating boyo.
| 3sum chapter 4 . 3/31/2011
| pacochico11 chapter 3 . 3/27/2011
i need more of this keep up keep up
| Semjaza chapter 3 . 3/23/2011
I love this story, and now I really want to know what's going on (I have a few suspicions/guesses, but I want to know for sure, lol). You're writing is good, and I like the little details you throw in. Thanks for posting! :D
| thousands of exciting spiders chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
i am using this opportunity to offer a well deserved tip for improvement:
needs more chas nega chas.
that is all.
| fleurs-du-mol chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
Another good chapter! John asshole. Pure and simple. And I so don't mean this in a condescending way, but your writing style (grammar and prose) is improving. :D It wasn't bad before, but you're polishing it up!
| DarknessIsTheUniverse chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
cool, youre fast :-)
so it looks like Jack is more than meets the eye,thats great. i wonder if John recognized him and wants to talk to Chaz about that or if hes just jealous. any way, I cant wait.
keep up the good work!
| DarknessIsTheUniverse chapter 2 . 3/18/2011
oh Im so happy someone is still writing Constantine fics!
i like this very much so far, it has a lot of unanswered questions. Im sure John is jealous but i cant help but wonder if he might be a bit worried too, since there seems to be something odd about Jack.
Why is it he was at Midnites in the first place? Heres hoping hes some kind of demon :-)
please update soon!
| fleurs-du-mol chapter 2 . 3/17/2011
Oh Chas... he's like a puppy.
Good start! I think the way you've written him is spot-on, and I love me some Chastine! :) However- one tiny nit-pick- how did he get into Midnite's in the first place? (He's underage and can't divine the cards properly.)