Reviews for A Mary Sue in River City
Outasync chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
This is brilliant! From "WE LOVE CAPS LOCK!" and totally OOC declarations of adoration, to censored sex-scenes and jealous sisters... I hope you carried on with this, and will post it soon.

It's scarily easy to write Sue-types. Good parodies like this help me to spot her in my own stories. Thanks for the lesson - and the laugh!
ShadowKing1988 chapter 2 . 4/5/2011
(*In stitches*) Bravo! You have reminded me why I read Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu fics...they always make me laugh! The, erm, "Love scene" was particularly amusing.