|Reviews for Bits and Pieces|
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/10/2016
Oh, I can't believe I was 4 years late to the party, but this is beautiful! I refrained myself from reviewing until now because I wanted to save it all for last. I'm afraid I'm not smart enough to dissect this piece and point out every beautiful thing- that would take all of eternity, because this story is full of it. But I love this fic because it's consistent, realistic, had a spot on portrayal of characters, and left so many possibilities! I also loved the little side relationships and details- everything is beautiful and gay. I honest to god think this is the best NTouya retelling fanfic I've read. The best part is all the themes of ideals, truth, and fighting for what you believe is best no matter what. This was absolutely beautiful. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2016
This was really nice, well written and refreshing~ I really like how you pictured Touya and N, gonna follow!
| SoullessBreath chapter 18 . 2/20/2016
Strewth mate! This was such awesome to read. I really got hooked of it. It was all amazing to read! I couldn't stop reading this. It was really cute how they hugged. Thanks for writing this mate. I really enjoyed it. So gonna add this to my favs.
| pokefan22546 chapter 13 . 2/5/2015
Ah, Rowan the x - team plasma. Perfect ally.
| pokefan22546 chapter 12 . 2/5/2015
AAAAAAAHHHHHHH AWESOME LAMPENT!
| pokefan22546 chapter 10 . 2/5/2015
| pokefan22546 chapter 7 . 2/4/2015
I don't care if that was a short chapter, this is still the best pokemon story I've ever read. And trust me, I've read a lot.
| Reynard chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
I really like it! And stiff? N and Touya/Hilbert/Black/Whatever-people-put-their-name-as seem to speak pretty well to me. People don't always have long, flowing conversations. It's alright if it sounds kinda awkward and random, since, well, that's how people speak!
Now, to continue reading...
| Melancholing chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
The depths you created from the games' storyline is amazing. ;A; I hope to see more of other works from you!
| aloof-kokiri chapter 18 . 2/20/2014
Wow. This was pretty interesting. I really enjoyed your characterisation of everyone.
Most of all though I loved how you portrayed the Pokémon. I know that sounds silly, but you balanced their animal like behaviour and the fact that they are powerful monsters into a nice mix. They can be both adorable and affectionate, yet also protective and feral. I really love how you displayed that.
Keep on writing. I hope to find more of your works in the future!
| Hibary-Hiwatari chapter 18 . 8/5/2013
So beautiful (speechless)
Please write more isshushipping goodness again.
| Pandas Are Still Bears RAWR chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Ooooh! 119 reviews! Imma tip that scale baby :3 love the guilt tripping in the beginning and Oshawott, so glad you made him Touya's starter :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
I sense a love triangle
| wolfeclipse25 chapter 11 . 2/21/2013
Hahaha! Oh, poor Lampent! You've been following Touya all day!
| aubade chapter 18 . 2/8/2013
Ahahahaha math confession. So N. I think this chapter was sufficiently adorable. :)