Reviews for In the Shallows
Bug0369 chapter 9 . 9/28/2016
Wow she's an idiot
jk chapter 10 . 7/20/2016
does she really believe that this prick left her for TWO YEARS and wasn't fucking around?
jk chapter 9 . 7/20/2016
chapter ? is fucking bullshit
jk chapter 8 . 7/20/2016
he never told his wife he didn't love her, didn't want her, wanted a divorce to hurt her? ummmmm
he cant be serious, he never wanted to hurt her? did he really think that telling his WIFE he didn't love her wouldn't hurt her? IS HE FUCKING STUPID? I hope bella doesn't take him back, what he did was soooo fucked up
Guest chapter 9 . 5/24/2016
He leaves her broken writes her letters and then knocks on her door then bam there fucking yeah only in fiction this would happen they haven't resolved a thing like...Bella's pretty pathetic actually if this were me love or not I'd never let someone treat me like crap then accept them back just like that
jk chapter 9 . 3/31/2016
he left her, divorced her, stayed away for TWO FUCKING YEARS and all he has to do to be with her again is knock on her fucking door?
hell no and fuck that
jk chapter 8 . 3/31/2016
sooo on the year anniversary of the date he LEFT HER he writes her a letter explaining why he left and tells her that IN ANOTHER YEAR! he will come back to her?

Is he fucking stupid?
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 12 . 3/9/2016
Thank you for sharing your words. The art of the short story is rare but you've created a world in your 12 complete chapters. A fast roller coaster ride!
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 11 . 3/9/2016
Oh, I was not expecting this. Beautiful, but a shock. Lovely really.
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 10 . 3/9/2016
Well. I'm anxious for them.
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 9 . 3/9/2016
So she has forgiven. Beautifully written.
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 8 . 3/9/2016
Oh, I see now. Control - just like the book. He knew best. Men!
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 7 . 3/9/2016
What is he doing? Is this something good?
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 6 . 3/9/2016
Oh no. She is all alone.
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 5 . 3/9/2016
He's left her because she can't have children? His family won't be there for her? So terrible.
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