Reviews for A male point of view
amber.mccall1 chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
i am going to come back and read more when it up. good job
brokenangelwings16 chapter 2 . 1/26/2012
plz keep writing
Rozale chapter 2 . 10/25/2011
loved it hope to see more soon
bellesammileigh chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
Ficking nice. Its great how you wrote it. Can't wait for the next chapter yo.
roseskyangel chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
this is good love it
Jessica chapter 2 . 5/23/2011
I really like what you are doing with the story, i have always wonderd what gabes opinion in all this was :) i like the way you har captured his chariktor

Sorry for my bad spelling im Danish
TocoGirlHills chapter 2 . 5/22/2011
Can't wait for the next chapter!
sarah chapter 2 . 5/19/2011
okay ill stick with u and thanx for telling us when the nxt chap was coming instad of making us check keep going and i love it
anna chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
i like it but can u make it were its the REAL part of the story
e7e chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
You did a really good job! i found it really refreshing to read such a story. I like it also that they have a relationship bofore the book starts! I hoop you will write more! good luck
M.K.J chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
i like this story, and i like how its from Gabe's point of view and hopefully Vivian's. i did feel at first like some of those parts that happened didnt really belong, because i felt like there was no way could have happened because in the book, VIVIAN had siad that she did hate Gabe, but now that i understand its your thoughts, mixed with the things that happened in the book, i happy to say that i cant wait for the next chapter.
Shanda chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
i love this first chapter .. in all honesty i haven't read the origanal book but i haveseen themovie at least 11 times .. this is great though ... keep it up
sarah chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
OMG...this is the first time im the first to review..

i really like ur idea for a Gabe pov..and ur doing a great job..i really do love it..

..however idk on what ur final plan for the story is but, i don't really understand the whole kiss thing..cause i definitely know she hates Gabe in the Klause version.

so to summarize i really do love the idea and plz continue..