|Reviews for If Only|
| Feistyvixen chapter 13 . 1/19
Wow. That just broke my heart! Actually brought tears to my eyes to not see them together, after having read the other ending. Fantastically written!
Needless to say I LOVE this story! (with the original ending) I just love these two together!
| Hola chica chapter 3 . 9/1/2017
I have this feeling that Edward has hidden feelings that he can't fully come to terms with, and maybe he also sort of knows of Jacob's feelings but he's too confused with himself to address it completely. That's why he does these little *things* because they're still within the boundary and don't pass the bottom line he's set for himself.
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/8/2017
This was the best chapter so far
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/6/2017
This was awesome and really turned me on
| bartlettpear chapter 19 . 2/18/2017
Thank you for writing this and kudos on the POV switches, it was lovely getting to see in the mind of both characters and I am glad they got a happy ending even in the alternate ending where they weren't together. Thank you for writing this story and the bonus chapters :D!
| butzi chapter 19 . 10/3/2016
Oh Edward, still in the dark about his feelings. Thank you!
| butzi chapter 18 . 10/3/2016
Excellent! I will miss them.
Great story and outtakes, I really enjoyed them. Thank you!
| butzi chapter 17 . 10/3/2016
This question was in my head too.
| butzi chapter 16 . 10/3/2016
This "filthy hotel sex" scene was very well written, liked it.
| butzi chapter 15 . 10/2/2016
"Yeah, this is pretty much the best." I agree!
| butzi chapter 14 . 10/2/2016
Learning by doing :-) Hot!
| butzi chapter 13 . 10/2/2016
A very different HEA, good they worked it out.
| butzi chapter 12 . 10/2/2016
| butzi chapter 11 . 10/2/2016
Great! Love it.
| butzi chapter 10 . 5/29/2016
Great story, love it! Happy they worked it out. Where is the make up good stuff? :-)