Reviews for If Only
Guest chapter 7 . 4/8
This was the best chapter so far
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6
This was awesome and really turned me on
ranoshi chapter 19 . 2/18
Thank you for writing this and kudos on the POV switches, it was lovely getting to see in the mind of both characters and I am glad they got a happy ending even in the alternate ending where they weren't together. Thank you for writing this story and the bonus chapters :D!
butzi chapter 19 . 10/3/2016
Oh Edward, still in the dark about his feelings. Thank you!
butzi chapter 18 . 10/3/2016
Excellent! I will miss them.

Great story and outtakes, I really enjoyed them. Thank you!
butzi chapter 17 . 10/3/2016
This question was in my head too.
butzi chapter 16 . 10/3/2016
This "filthy hotel sex" scene was very well written, liked it.
butzi chapter 15 . 10/2/2016
"Yeah, this is pretty much the best." I agree!
butzi chapter 14 . 10/2/2016
Learning by doing :-) Hot!
butzi chapter 13 . 10/2/2016
A very different HEA, good they worked it out.
butzi chapter 12 . 10/2/2016
Smart E.
butzi chapter 11 . 10/2/2016
Great! Love it.
butzi chapter 10 . 5/29/2016
Great story, love it! Happy they worked it out. Where is the make up good stuff? :-)
butzi chapter 9 . 5/29/2016
Oh dear, I hope they come out of this okay.
butzi chapter 8 . 5/29/2016
He is still not clear about his sexuality.
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