|Reviews for In The Shadow of Zero|
| Mister Cuddlesworth chapter 3 . 6/24
Damn shame this died. I enjoyed it.
| fellow chapter 3 . 11/11/2015
| rifful chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
i think i liked the first version better. too much detail in this one and the personalities are less likable.
| Primus2021 chapter 2 . 8/30/2014
Martivir ui vi Wharac, Mobi ui Ergriff Ghralfanyo,
Erekess ghralfanyo, Si clax dastudr,
Erekess dastudr, Si clax vivex,
Erekess vivex, Sia platohol re-
I'd like you to finish this, with the comments my best translation would be...
(Peace is a Lie, There is Only Passion,)
(Through Passion, I gain Strangth,)
(Through Strangth I gain Power,)
(Through Power, I gain Victory,)
(Through Victory, My Chains are Broken,)
(The Force, Will set me Free.)
| entelejent chapter 3 . 8/3/2014
I enjoyed it. Some things are weird or could use more explanation.
| Sakurada Kiritsugu chapter 3 . 7/9/2014
A dark elf that can turn into a dragon? Or a dragon that can turn into a dark elf? I like this guy already, I await further chapters!
| Jordan Cat chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
Ah crap, this is where it leaves off? And it's been 3 years since the last update?
But it's so good! I loved it, I want to see more of it.
| kffs chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
Super fun and interesting!
Thanks for writing!
| Elnore chapter 3 . 4/5/2014
Love the magical theory and how you are training both a sorcerer and a wizard with two main characters.
If you still look at your Fanficiton page and read these reviews I would suggest you continue this story.
It definitely has potential even with the heavy theory and dry explanations.
| FranticHamster chapter 3 . 1/10/2014
Great story one of the best OCs I have ever had the pleasure of reading about.
| erching chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
shame you dropped this its pretty good
| Anti-Mage chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Jokes aside, this is excellent. Thank you for your hard work.
| Puck.HS chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
You can see the continuation of this at - threads/in-the-shadow-of-zero-part-2.213355/
| ShadowCub chapter 3 . 7/25/2013
| Less Wrong chapter 3 . 6/24/2013
I shall be here to continue reading if this story resumes.