|Reviews for Relinquish|
| kenni no. 1 chapter 13 . 1/15
wow, soo much intense drama jammed pack into this story! i should read friendship fics like this more often.
suggestion for the band name: Rookie
| aryaputra chapter 13 . 1/6
I'm not sure why but it somehow comes to my mind. That word.
Here is what it means:
*Consonance and dissonance in music are properties of an interval or chord (the quality of a discord)
*Cognitive dissonance is a state of mental conflict
*Cultural dissonance is an uncomfortable sense experienced by people in the midst of change in their cultural environment.
To be honest, I choose to suggest this word as the name for the band because it has become one of my favourite words. I like to say it out loud and taste the words, feel their tremor coming out of my mouth. It's something fragile and glass-like but strong. It's something that endures.
So I was hoping you'd consider 'Dissonance' as one of the potential names.
I was very surprised by the number of reviews for this fic. In the midst of reading I somehow felt like scrolling back up and checking to see how many people had reviewed this fic.
I expected more than a hundred. Even a thousand. But I think over time, people will realize how good this fic is. How rare it is.
I admire the way you managed to weave all their little stories into one fic. It was something unexpected but really very well executed.
I wanted to stop reading after going through TenTen's part in the 1st chapter. It was too heartbreaking to see the normally-cheerful girl so...broken-down. I was very sad and I could feel her pain. But I kept reading because I wanted to know how Itachi fit into this picture. I wanted to know why Ino kept on being with Chouji despite everything he did. And I wanted to know if it was possible for all of them to get a sliver of hope or a final taste of happiness.
And I'm glad I continued reading.
Best of luck and I really look forward to reading this to the end.
| Darth-Taisha chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Dearest, please update this okay...I have to know how it all ends. Hugs.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Seriously, when are you going to update this? I love it.
| queenofthenial chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
Sakura is an annoying twit. She should be begging for Hinatas forgiveness and naurto is an idiot!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
This story is just awesome...when are you going to update it...soon would be nice. I really love it.
| animelover00094 chapter 13 . 3/23/2013
Have you no heart! Going to give all these lovely updates and then end it all with a cliffy. I can't be sure if I dislike you greatly or am just overjoyed and grateful. Just. Update soon please
| Darth-Taisha chapter 13 . 3/22/2013
Go away f'ing Naruto, you are not wanted in this story. Sasuke said it best when he called him a loser and an idiot. Loved the lyrics of the song and I am glad Ino didn't die. Good thing Hinata had that feeling and Neji was kind enough to listen to her. Good chapter.
| Darth-Taisha chapter 10 . 3/22/2013
Wow, Ino is one messed up chick. Hopefully Hinata will be able to get through to her and she will finally have the courage to get rid of her POS boyfriend. Nice scene at the end with Sasuke and Naruto.
| Darth-Taisha chapter 9 . 3/22/2013
I have to say it is difficult to read Choji acting like a complete A-hole because he normally is such a simple and cheerful character, but I find in this story it works. His behavior gives chances to other characters to really shine. Btw, I love the relationship between Hinata and Neji and also how protective Sasuke and Itachi are over her.
| Darth-Taisha chapter 8 . 3/22/2013
Awesome chapter. I have to say I am now torn, because (damn it) I love Neji with Tenten too. Sigh, I will honestly be happy with whoever she ends up with. Maybe just a little more happy if she ends up with Sasuke, because there will be more drama. Her and Neji are long-time friends, but with Sasuke they barely know each other so there is the discovery phase of their relationship to look forward to. Anyway, it is all lovely and I kind of hope it goes on for a long, long time. Keep up the great work! Also, I could hug you for the wonderful Itahina scene at the end.
| Darth-Taisha chapter 7 . 3/22/2013
Yay Kankuro! Also EWW for that visual of Naruto and Sakura together *shudders* And best of all a big THANK YOU for the SasuTen, I loved every bit of it. THANK YOU! Your posts today seriously made my day. On a serious note, I think the scene with Ino and how she felt alone in a room full of partying people was especially poignant and made me want to go hug her.
| Darth-Taisha chapter 6 . 3/22/2013
I loved the part with Itachi and Hinata and I could feel her embarrassment. Those lyrics were pretty sappy to be singing outloud lol. I am off to find out more about the cliffie you left us.
| Darth-Taisha chapter 5 . 3/22/2013
Another great chapter! First off, the scene with Sasuke and Naruto fighting and Hinata missing all of the drama was very well done. It seemed to fit everyone very well, especially Hinata. I hope you are going to have Neji take revenge on Sakura by getting her to like him and break up with Naruto then dump her. I can't wait to see how you handle the situation, just know I love it all and I am on pins and needles to read the rest.
| Darth-Taisha chapter 4 . 3/22/2013
Thanks so much for working on this story, it is sooo good. The quality of your writing is still wonderful and I can't wait to get caught up on this story. It was weird but I actually watched some Naruto Shippuden last night and it was great. I watched episode 298 (I think) it was Naruto vs Itachi. Anyway, thanks again so much for writing and posting so many chapters! I miss writing you, I hope all is well in your life:)