Reviews for Shattered
RomEdy Girl chapter 7 . 3/3/2018
I'm sorry about your stepfather. I hope you find sometime and complete this fix someday...
Viviana chapter 7 . 5/23/2016
Hello, I apologize for my English (it is good enough to understand your fanfic but not good enough to express myself correctly). I was awake until 4 am reading your fanfic, and then when i wake up, I kept reading the rest of it during my spare time :). I was a little sad when i read the notes and see what was on hiatus, and I'm sorry about your stepfather.
I just wanted to tell you how much i love your story, and I hope you update when you feel ready, I will be downloading to my phone to keep track of updates. God, I should have paid more attention to my English classes XD
librastar chapter 7 . 5/7/2016
Ah adult life. It's not fun is it haha - especially once you leave college and realise the real world is nowhere near as cool as it looked growing up. I wish you all the best with your writing and career, and hope you can find it in your heart of hearts to come back to this story and update it one day. I was randomly browsing Egoshippy Fics, something I haven't done for years and your story has reminded me why I used to love the fandom so much. Both Gary and Misty were written wonderfully in character and the pacing and plot of the entire story was just would be a shame if the story just died out like this, so hopefully you will come back to it one day and finish it up.

Much love
AquaraCupcakes chapter 7 . 8/26/2015
Nice! Great Story you have here. I love the story line and your writing. I should really buck up on my writing skills * laughs * So, here is a virtual cookie for ya and keep updating!
LiliNeko chapter 7 . 3/8/2015
Hey chicka!

Long time no see/chat...Oh how I miss our fangirling days. Man being an adult just sucks doesn't? Oh speaking of that, Welcome to Adult/college life! Haha.

Well since we last talked, you said you were rewriting the chapters to make it better and your own/baby. Which is awesome and please do keep that motivation. As I gotta say, just reading the revised summary, I'm like way-way excited to reread/pick this back up. Because of the last sentence of the summary, all sorts of events/ending can happen and who doesn't like a pair of bad-ass egotistics, kekeke.

But of course once were older the lesser free time we have, just play it slow and go at your pace. As all my readers always tell me, take your time on writing.

Other than that, take care of yourself and don't get too buried under all that workload, haha. Much lovies and ta ta for now!

Less Than Three, Lili
EmmRar chapter 6 . 2/16/2015
I am excited for you to continue/rewrite this story. I am really intrigued!
varee chapter 6 . 1/20/2015
I'm holding you up to your word you know. You'll hear from me again.
Modern Kassandra chapter 6 . 1/11/2015
This is so true for a lot of fan fiction writers. We all start a story, but somewhere along the way, we lose it. I know you'll do a great re-write of this story and I know I can't wait to read it since it's one of my favourites due to its unique concept and sassy characters :D Waiting eagerly for the first new chapter :)
- Modern Kassandra
Maninova chapter 6 . 1/11/2015
I will always support this story and u .
Since I can understand ur situation
I m going through the same thing
Like u have ur own little world of fiction n fantasy
And suddenly u realize that real world is different from our world
And won't work the way we wAnt
I hope u pursue ur dream
I m also trying that
So I have u update soon _
Guest chapter 5 . 12/29/2014
Why the f*** did you stop?! It keeps getting better please continue! Else I feel like I'll die...
MistyRules chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
LiliNeko chapter 5 . 10/31/2012
You don't know HOW much I totally smiled through out this chapter!

ONE, Gary was shirtless and a pair of pj pants...

TWO, he got his flirting charm on...

THREE, driving misty crazy...

FOUR, did I mention he was shirtless? Oh I did, but second time around he was in a towel...

FIVE, the race/fight was just so adorable and fitting for the situation...

Hahaha, I know my review is just redonkulous XD but that's just how I am ;p I really do enjoy your plot, cuz it's something I don't think I can pull off. The whole serious, dark ish kind of theme, as I'm all about the drama cliche, haha. So kudos to you chicka! Keep up with your story and I'll be continue reading it when I get the chance XD Lovies and ta-ta for now!

Lili Neko -
LiliNeko chapter 4 . 10/31/2012
Oh gawd, I'm SO HORRIBLE on time XD haha anyways I read this on my cell during my breaks at work but I totally don't trust my cell on leaving reviews due to the wifi connections ;p

Sooo I'm a bit intrigue with the Mack guy, the fact Misty had a run in with him before and the second time around. And gooooosh, things got intense towards the end o_0 buuut w00t! She kinda found the fitting name to "Kai" , kekeke.

Well on wards to the next chappy review! Lovies!

penguin 2 chapter 6 . 10/8/2012
Please update soon this story is so good and addictive! I love the idea of Misty joining Team Aqua and her fights with Gary can't wait to see what'll happen next!
Ori chapter 6 . 8/3/2012
Oh that sim is cool.
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