|Reviews for Family|
| mia chapter 1 . 2/2
Hey, awesome fic! I already read 3 times. I really hope you finish it someday. :)
| nazurath92 chapter 5 . 1/18
This story is awesome I loved how you put it I don't know why but I never liked Lisauna can't wait till the next chapter
| MusicMyEscape-DemiGodSlytherin chapter 5 . 10/15/2013
great story update
| IvoryQueen chapter 3 . 3/16/2013
Hey! New reader here and totally impressed. I've read a lot of your Gratsu work lately and I also (accidentally) read a very different Mpreg piece. I found that I the only thing I really enjoyed about that piece was what I'd actively sought to avoid prior: the Mpreg. I tried to find another Mpreg piece and in the process stumbled upon this. I have to say I'm loving the story so far and Gray as uke (and mom) or not, you're doing a wonderful job. I do have two qualms though. The first I'm seeing is a continuos pattern and it's kind of a pet peeve of mine. You often refer to Gray as the "wife". I understand that this just means that Natsu's the alpha male but calling Gray the wife suggests a gender swap. The second tif I have has to do with this story specifically (and I may be completely wrong about it regardless). If my memory serves me – which it usually doesn't – then in the first chapter you had said Natsu had been on a mission for two months. If Natsu's the father, than Gray would have stopped getting morning sick a month before Natsu got home and by the time Gray told Natsu, he would have been two and a half to three months pregnant, not a month and a half. Just saying this now: I'm not reading this if Natsu's not the dad. I can't stand love triangles. But I may just be getting my facts wrong. Anyways, I love the story so far and I can't wait to see where it goes!
Best of luck ;) IvoryQueen
| Xxpuppy590xX chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
I really love this story so far, I love the fact that Natsu and Gray are together, and that they are gonna have a baby. I can't believe that it's Lisanna who is attacking Gray I really didn't see that coming! I wonder who the other person she was talking to is though? I really hope you plan on continuing on with this story, I would love to read more!
| sktrgrl13 chapter 5 . 12/31/2012
this needs more! i need to know what their baby looks like and what magic it has lol plus i want to see the epic battle with lisanna!
| Aoi chapter 5 . 12/12/2012
Waahhh I hope the baby safe..
Can't wait for the baby (ʃƪ)
Ganbatte ne ...fight-too
| azab chapter 5 . 10/4/2012
i loved it a lot hope you update soooooooooooooooooooooon
| azab chapter 4 . 10/3/2012
i loved it a lot :)
| azab chapter 3 . 10/3/2012
i loved it a lot and yay i love overprotective natsu
| azab chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
i loved it a lot can't Waite for the next update :)
| azab chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
i loved it a lot
| animeyaoigirl chapter 5 . 9/27/2012
I read this a long time ago...just never commented on it... I love it sooo much! I was reading it on my phone at the time and I just could not look away from it. I love mpregs especially with natsuxgray *fangirl scream* lol although this is the only mpreg story of those two that I could fine! ugh! It's frustrating! anyway please hurry up and update...I really wanna see what happens next!
| Lucifer98 chapter 5 . 9/23/2012
WAHH I bet its Juvia and Lisanna! As for the last person Im not sure Hahah this story is interesting! I love how Gray is the Uke 3 heheh although it is abit out of their actual character, I like this story alot :DD Update soon
| KawaiiTenshiGakutoMukahi chapter 5 . 9/1/2012
love it all! this is really an amazing fic, hehe, it's also really funny, really love it to bits, hope you update soon, and hope no harm will happen to gray... update this please