|Reviews for Family|
| Ender WolfQueen chapter 5 . 11/26/2015
I hope you continue this. I want to see more Natsu fussing over Gray. w
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 2 . 8/20/2015
You overstate things sometimes, but the way those two woke up was so cute.
| fanime.sasuke.girl.xxx chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
Please continue with this fic i really luv and would like 2 find out what happends next plzzzzz
| Malene211 chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
Why does this author have so many unfinished stories from like two years ago!
| Lilly chapter 5 . 7/19/2014
Bitch...even in the anime I never liked her. She's too percy and fronting...
| lucy chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
por favor termina la historia
| sara chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
cuando bas a subir el siguiente capitulo porque esta interesante y me gusto
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/8/2014
Can you pls continue this story I love it so muchhh
| TrivonikaEdward chapter 5 . 4/7/2014
Hi I wanted to ask can you please finish the story
| pollyh12 chapter 5 . 3/15/2014
OH I JUST LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! DO IT OR ILL EAT YOUR SOUL.
| mia chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Hey, awesome fic! I already read 3 times. I really hope you finish it someday. :)
| nazurath92 chapter 5 . 1/18/2014
This story is awesome I loved how you put it I don't know why but I never liked Lisauna can't wait till the next chapter
| MusicMyEscape chapter 5 . 10/15/2013
great story update
| IvoryQueen chapter 3 . 3/16/2013
Hey! New reader here and totally impressed. I've read a lot of your Gratsu work lately and I also (accidentally) read a very different Mpreg piece. I found that I the only thing I really enjoyed about that piece was what I'd actively sought to avoid prior: the Mpreg. I tried to find another Mpreg piece and in the process stumbled upon this. I have to say I'm loving the story so far and Gray as uke (and mom) or not, you're doing a wonderful job. I do have two qualms though. The first I'm seeing is a continuos pattern and it's kind of a pet peeve of mine. You often refer to Gray as the "wife". I understand that this just means that Natsu's the alpha male but calling Gray the wife suggests a gender swap. The second tif I have has to do with this story specifically (and I may be completely wrong about it regardless). If my memory serves me – which it usually doesn't – then in the first chapter you had said Natsu had been on a mission for two months. If Natsu's the father, than Gray would have stopped getting morning sick a month before Natsu got home and by the time Gray told Natsu, he would have been two and a half to three months pregnant, not a month and a half. Just saying this now: I'm not reading this if Natsu's not the dad. I can't stand love triangles. But I may just be getting my facts wrong. Anyways, I love the story so far and I can't wait to see where it goes!
Best of luck ;) IvoryQueen
| Xxpuppy590xX chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
I really love this story so far, I love the fact that Natsu and Gray are together, and that they are gonna have a baby. I can't believe that it's Lisanna who is attacking Gray I really didn't see that coming! I wonder who the other person she was talking to is though? I really hope you plan on continuing on with this story, I would love to read more!