Reviews for Reward
knightvalen chapter 4 . 7/28/2015
Oh yeah this story also reminds me of a picture since it is very extinct. I have a picture of sadist!Near x Mello. I could always show you if any of the readers is interested in seeing it xD
knightvalen chapter 5 . 7/28/2015
Anyway I'm quite amused that there is the other sadist!NearxMello here since everyone will most likely to refuse to write this lol
This is the 2nd time I found the story like this. Applauses for the author's braveness.
knightvalen chapter 6 . 7/28/2015
Mello is completely a victim here. All the sadism Near did to Mello is very unfair and unacceptable. Well, that wouldn't have happened if Matt did not do such an action to Near that had 'caused all of this in the first place. I hate both Near and Matt.
knightvalen chapter 7 . 7/28/2015
As much as I like the idea of seme Near, but still you made him insane lol and however this is fanfiction, you're free to write whatever plot you want. That's your right, I won't judge it irrationally.
Mello was a property in this game, I admit that I hate both Near and Matt here for particular reasons.
COMPLETARE chapter 6 . 9/2/2014
I hated this actually so much that i had to review. Everyone's OOC (although that must have been done intentionally, since i can't believe anyone would know so little about these characters) and acting completely different from what any normal people would (seriously wtf, Mello got raped and all Matt can do is guilt-blame him? WHAT THE FUCK ? I didn't really have an opinion on that ship but after this...thank you, but no thank you.) You made me absolutely and utterly hate Near in this, and that is just sad because he's one of my favourite characters. God, i really had to skip over few parts and when i got to know he humiliated and used Mello in order to get back at Matt I just couldn't finish it. Maybe it was your intention to cause strong reactions, in which case you have succeeded and i have to congratulate you, because i have never hated anything as much as this (i'm not saying that you're a bad writer or anything like that, i just really dislike the way you portray these characters as manipulative, psychopatic assholes)
GlOmP3R chapter 7 . 7/3/2013
I loved this story. Everyone was WAY out of charector, but it was a kickass story. I just didn't like the way L was.. bt other then that, aweome job !
Noelle chapter 7 . 2/19/2013
That... Was very twisted...
Black Streak chapter 7 . 8/17/2012
Ahh! I don't mean to flame in any way, and I love your writing style and ability, but Near is my favorite character ever and I can't help but hate this for what you made him out to be. Great writing, but I love Near, how could you do this to him?! I know he seems emotionless and terribly uncaring, but that can't be the real him! TT
Exploading albino potato chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Woooow. This was the most OOC fanfiction I've ever read. Seriously, Mello is NOT obidient and as for Near, well making Near creepy is always interesting but there is limits to that. And he's what, 13? Also about Near, it was hinted in the series that he did have a crush on Mello but I would think that if he did he would at least try and make Mello love him, but all he seems to care about is sex. And this is also OOC for L because L may be an ass, but he's all about justice, and owning a person is illegal and most definitly NOT justice. So even if a student can get whatever they want, L would have thought of the many impossible/illegal things pepole could ask for before he made thay rule, because seriously he's a genius. And if that actually did happpen I am almost certain Mello would hate L and run away. But if the sole purpose of this fanfic was to be sick and twisted and horribly OOC than on a scale from 1 to 10 I give you a 13, 2 thumbs up and a cookie.
Giants2855 chapter 7 . 5/28/2012
Wow. Just wow. I usually don't read stories consisting of more than 2 or 3 chapters, but yours was just so, whats a good word for it, almost alluring or oddly a page turner. I think that this story was very well written, well worded, and very thought out. Please write more amazing stories like this. Thanks for reading this review.
BrooklynBabbii chapter 5 . 11/24/2011
W...T...F...WAT THE MOTHERFUCKING HELL TO DA FUCK! DAT BEEATCH TOLD MELLO TO SUCK HIS DICK IN FUCKING CLASS? oh hell no! HELL TO DA MOTHERFUCKING NO! wth, man? AND MELLO- MY MAIN MOTHERFUCKING BROTHER IN SEXY ASS LEATHER- ACTUALLY DID IT? WTMFF! OMIFGOD...POOR MATT, THAT ALBINO SON OF A BITCH! i wanna kill him! poor mello, i fucking hate L now...but i loathe Near even more with his fucking twisted tricks! he could go jerk himself off in hell while everyone laughs at his puny dick and throws bombs full of acid!

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anyways~this is a very amazing story, and yhu're fucking awesome for writing it...:)
ShinoKiba4EVER chapter 7 . 11/18/2011
This was a little sad since i like near x mello, but the story was nice. If only there was alternate ending? Maybe...
MusicIsMyFate chapter 7 . 10/15/2011
Man, the ending is so sad and sappy, like those drama movies that have the sad ending that makes your heart beat out of your chest and you just want to cry :D great jod, dude
slimegirl chapter 7 . 8/31/2011
Througout the story, I was crying for Mello and Matt. D':

That is just horrible..

L is truckin stupid, Near is crazy, and Roger is just...Beeeotch.

T-T

I really liked your story though. The ending was nice. Thank God.. xD

Awesome job. c:
XMattxXxNearX chapter 7 . 7/29/2011
omg love the ending so sweet
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