|Reviews for Meeting at Last|
| TACAitsH chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Once again, the idea for this fic is wonderful.
I hate being critical because I think you have a very creative mind and I don't want you to think I'm being mean, but I have to say that this story would have been a thousand times better if there were more detail. It seemed so rushed and formal. I would have loved to get a better feel of their meeting, it seemed like it should have been more emotional. But this is just my opinion. And like I said, don't let me get you down because I think you have wonderful ideas.
Also I'm curious about the kids in this? Who are they and
why are you placing such importance on them?
Anyway, great fics. I'm looking forward to anything else you have coming :)