Reviews for Can't Forget You
joss859 chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
That was amazingly beautiful. I loved it.
Fliberty chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
I love this!

I love the idea of them each making such an impact on the other that they couldn’t move on. This would be an awfully sad story if the feelings were not mutual but their connection is wonderful. I love the way that Edward found a way to come back when the time was right.

It was painful watching them meeting in public after no communication for 5 years. I wish Edward could have found a way to meet Jasper alone before seeing him with everyone else. Angela was great, such a sweet and loyal friend.

I am glad Edward so persistent about making Jasper talk to him. Jasper was being dumb avoiding Edward like that but it is understandable after the pain he went through. Edward seemed to understand the way he reacted.

I liked Edward being so careful about protecting them both from becoming more than friends, in case the job didn’t work out. I would love to know more about Edward and how he coped with leaving Jasper behind. I loved the surprise tattoo, such a lovely touch and a perfect way for Edward to show Jasper that he felt the same way.

I am so happy that they were able to have a relationship and suddenly had so much to look forward to.

I must admit I was gutted that we didn’t get to the lemons. I was so looking forward to that!

Do you think you will ever write more about these two?

I would love to read more about their night back together and how they cope with being separated again for a few weeks. I would love to see how their relationship develops since it could put pressure on a relationship when one of them has moved across the world so they can be together. Will Edward move in with Jasper or will they do the dating thing with Edward in his own place? How will it be accepted at work for them to be together? What if it doesn’t work out after all they have been through? I would really love an outtake of their night together before Edward left 5 years ago. That sounded like one hot night!

Thanks for sharing your story. As you can probably tell, I really enjoyed it and I will be checking out your other work :-
Maureen Thomas chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Will you continue this story? Slashy detail can be done in chapter 2! Great story! Would love to read more! Very well developed characters. If this is a OS, maybe do another OS, like 10 yrs from now and where things have gone from here?
Lori94 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Love it!
twimama77 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Very awesome
Robpfan chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
God...Robyn is a very lucky girl...

I loved the whole angst, drama, Hea thing you had going on... those boys can pull of any kind of story...

Welcome back and I look forward to anything you want to send us...

Take care
VSPS chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Great story... loved it. they pimped you on Twilight Muses, and I'm glad they did... great job - V
mw138 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
That was incredible! I always love a good Jasper/Edward love story & this definitely fit the bill! Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale with us! :)
Ealasaid77 chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Aww, finally got to stay.
racejunkie chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
i was beginning to doubt my jasper was going to get his HEA...thanks for not disappointing us! ;D

i love the deep emotional ride you took me on.

racejunkie
rmhale chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Deb,

I am so sorry it has taken me two days to review this but I wanted to take the time to read it and it is long.

First of all, thank you so much for coming out of hiding to write for me. You have no idea how much it means to me, truly.

Second, this was...I have no words as I sit here crying my eyes out. Jasper's pain was heart wrenching and devastating. His desperation he felt in regards to his feelings for Edward and his anguish when he heard Edward didn't get the job sent wave after wave of emotion through me.

It's so hard, falling in love and being apart. I can't go 5 days without my husband, I can not imagine five years without the one you love.

So many people mock an instant love, thinking people need a simmering, long-lasting love but it is out there. True love. Your body just knows when you look into their eyes for the first time. There is a huge difference in the way you respond to touch, to seeing them, to their mere presence in the room. Few are lucky to feel that and I count myself int he lucky few.

Now...YOU PUT ME IN THE FIC! I fucking love you so much. And I own a Starbucks (how appropriate) and I am good friends with Jasper? You made me a happy girl.

And...the tattoo (heart melting thud)...

But...the winner!

Wait for it...

Wait...

You know...

What it is...

Edward's fucking perfect UNCUT cock...goddamn foreskin is hot!

Thank you, I adore you...

Robyn
VampireLestat12 chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
that was beautiful! I really loved it! I love lemons as much as the next slash addict but this story didn't need them, it is perfect the way it is. So romantic, loving, just...aaah.

What a nice tribute to rmhale and it was so sweet of you to include her in the story!

I know it is complete but I would love to hear EPOV. Can't imagine what he was thinking when J was playing it so cool and avoiding him. E was taking a big risk considering changing his job, moving to America and he didn't even know if J would like that or even if J was single. I am so happy there was a HEA for the boys, I am a sucker for HEA!

It is really great to have you back, really missed you and your boys!

Good luck with school and I look forward to the presents you mentioned in the AN.
freefall6 chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Great story - loved the tattoo and didn't miss the lemon!
Navygirl14 chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
I loved this! The power of love was too strong to keep them apart. I love these two together. So happy Edward came back because he loved Jasper too much to stay away anymore...YAY!
OnTheTurningAway chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
I really loved this fic, and while lemons are lovely, you included so much emotion and intimacy that I honestly didn't miss it. You created quite the rollercoaster for your boys and I'm so very happy that things worked out in the end.

It's nice to see you again - even if you only have time to pop by to share this lovely gift for Robyn with all of us. xoxo
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