Reviews for Over
chavamirjam chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Awww,so sad! Why do they have to part?
rpfangirljr chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
That was the sweetest, saddest thing I've read in a while. I feel like I need a hug.

Good luck!
mw138 chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Gorgeous and heartbreaking!
Fliberty chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
This is good work.

I've no idea why he is leaving but the emotion feels real. I hope you plan to write more so we can learn what has come between them.
fanficfreak1980 chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
One of the best written stories in the contest. It says so much in so little words. I love how you don't know which is E and which is J until the very end. And I love how you don't know what E has to leave him if he still loves him.

Would love to see this continued. You have my vote!
JasperLuver48 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Wow that was fantastically angsty, incredibly heart breaking, and all around perfect!

Loved it!

xoxo
MsEm chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
I'd love to see this continued!
ItsCeceTric chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
If you value my sanity, you will make this a multi-chaptered fic when the contest ends.

And if you want, you could add a HEA.

JS :) amazing story btw
Raven's twimom chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
WHY OH WHY HAVE YOU SEPERATED THEM!
tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
*cries* No! They can't break up! *cries some more*

I'm having a serious sad right now, but this was really good. I was hoping that they'd work it out, but *sad sigh* that didn't happen.

Great job, this is definitely one of my fave entries. : )