Reviews for Translucent Skies
phionexxx chapter 4 . 3/2/2013
OMG I AM STARTING TO LIKE THIS PAIRING. AND I WOULD SHIP IT IF I DIDN'T ALREADY SHIP A YAOI INCEST THREESOME BETWEEN ALL OF THE STRIATON BROTHERS (LOL IDK I JUST REALLY LIKE IT) AND AIRPLANESHIPPING. I. NEED. UPDATES.
wolfeclipse25 chapter 4 . 7/31/2012
I like these short ONE-shots! Please continue!
Soaring Crow Ver2.0 too lazy to login chapter 3 . 12/6/2011
I love these two. And I only find it few here. Need moarr love for chili. Wonder what will become his battle with cilan in the next episode of BW. You're the pioneer. Why don't you name the shipping?

- Crow

ps: UPDATE AND MAKE IT LONGER, please :)
Padfoot Arcanine chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
I love this so much! You're doing a great job. Hope you update soon! Keep up the great work!
xXkatlagXx chapter 2 . 6/24/2011
XD Aw, Elesa must like a spicy Chili huh? Cute chapter! Please update soon!
PrincessDiMimi chapter 2 . 6/19/2011
Wow this is really good so far! I hope you continue, I love this pairing!
bluaria chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
I love this pairing. You've inspired me to write a one-shot with them, some day sometime. Update soon!

Numbuh 14 is out of the house

- Transmission ended
bluaria chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
I like this pairing so far; it should get a name though. Sooner or later, it has too or I'll have to get my protesting kit ready.

Anyway, this Elesa is different in a good way. Some Elesa's are ditzy and airheads while other types tend to differ. I prefer this type of Elesa, though.

Numbuh 14 is out of the house!

- Transmission ended
Two-Tail-Demon chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
In a matter consisting of few words: I liked it. It's an unusual pairing, but I do so like the characterization you've used. Please update when you get the chance!
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Haha, yay! I like this Elesa - feisty and challenging. I can't wait to see where you got with this pairing!