Reviews for Emerald Mirage
Traverse the Portal chapter 15 . 4/20
This is honestly the best story I have read! The first night I started reading this I stayed up until 5 AM, it's seriously that good!
Blossom Celestia chapter 9 . 12/9/2016
Buttercup - Luna
Blossom - Celestia (Singer)

Lullaby for a Princess (PUFFED)
(Song owner: Ponyphonic)

Fate has been cruel
And order unkind
How can I have sent you away..?
The blame was my own,
The punishment yours
The harmony's silent today

But into the stillness
I'll bring you a song
And I wish you all of the best,
stop your childish lies
and tears in your eyes
I want you to get some good rest

Once stood a young girl
who shone like the sun
Look out of her window and sigh,
She smiled and said:
"Surely there is no other, so lovely
and so well beloved as I.."

So great was her pride and brilliant her glory
That long was the shadow she cast
Which fell dark upon the young sister she loved
And grew only darker as days and nights past

Soon did that young girl take notice that others
did not give her sister her due.
And neither had she loved her as she deserved
she watched as her sister's unhappiness grew.

But such is the way of her limelight it sweetly
takes hold of the mind of it's host
And that foolish hero did nothing to stop
the destruction of one who had needed her most.

BC young hero, good night sister of mine,
Sleep now as starlight's embrace
Bear up and my singing voice, echoing ears
Through cloud and through sky and through space.

Carry the peace and the kindness of earth
And carry my sorrow so right
BC you're loved so much more then you know,
May troubles be far from your sight,
And forgive me for starting a fight.

The years now before us, fearful and unknown
I've never imagined, I'd face them on my own..
May these thousands seasons, swiftly pass I pray
I love you, I miss you, All these miles away.

May all your dreams be, sweet tonight.
Safe upon your bed of your power's light.
And no kind of sadness, pain.. or care.
And when I dream I'll fly away, and meet you there

Sleep.. Sleep.. Sleep..

Man, talk about similarities.
Similarities fan chapter 10 . 12/9/2016
Buttercup - Luna
Blossom - Celestia (Singer)

Lullaby for a Princess (PUFFED)
(Song owner: Ponyphonic)

Fate has been cruel
And order unkind
How can I have sent you away..?
The blame was my own,
The punishment yours
The harmony's silent today

But into the stillness
I'll bring you a song
And I wish you all of the best,
stop your childish lies
and tears in your eyes
I want you to get some good rest

Once stood a young girl
who shone like the sun
Look out of her window and sigh,
She smiled and said:
"Surely there is no other, so lovely
and so well beloved as I.."

So great was her pride and brilliant her glory
That long was the shadow she cast
Which fell dark upon the young sister she loved
And grew only darker as days and nights past

BC young hero, good night sister of mine,
Sleep now as starlight's embrace
Bear up and my singing voice, echoing ears
Through cloud and through sky and through space.

Carry the peace and the kindness of earth
And carry my sorrow so right
BC you're loved so much more then you know,
forgive me for starting a fight..

Soon did that young girl take notice that others
did not give her sister her due.
And neither had she loved her as she deserved
she watched as her sister's unhappiness grew.

But such is the way of her limelight it sweetly
takes hold of the mind of it's host
And that foolish hero did nothing to stop
the destruction of one who had needed her most.

BC young hero, good night sister of mine,
Sleep now as starlight's embrace
Bear up and my singing voice, echoing ears
Through cloud and through sky and through space.

Carry the peace and the kindness of earth
And carry my sorrow so right
BC you're loved so much more then you know,
May troubles be far from your sight,
And forgive me for starting a fight.

The years now before us, fearful and unknown
I've never imagined, I'd face them on my own..
May these thousands seasons, swiftly pass I pray
I love you, I miss you, All these miles away.

May all your dreams be, sweet tonight.
Safe upon your bed of your power's light.
And no kind of sadness, pain.. or care.
And when I dream I'll fly away, and meet you there

Sleep.. Sleep.. Sleep..
Buttercup Lovers chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Buttercup deserves a better family with or without siblings anyway if you ask me.
Awesome chapter 15 . 8/9/2014
Man! This was awesome! I started it today and refused to put it down- except for that one time at the begining of this chapter when I had a headache and was about to die-! This was amazing, you did really well! I officially despise Mojo with a passion, and the only thing that could make this better is another chapter where they all find out who Jade Raven is, but this ending is awesome enough, so don't worry about it!
Lil'Redx chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
This story was amazing I'm glad I decided to read it.

Thanks for your effort!
Groudon202 chapter 15 . 12/27/2010
Wow. I was expecting a simple story, judging by the content usually contained in large stories in this fandom, and instead I got a story of immense quality, depth, character, and emotion.

What really made this story special for me was the journey for the characters. Yes, it was full of surprises, but more importantly, it immersed me and made these girls human (not badly imagined products that exist in most of this fandom's stories).

While it was a little OOC in places (this is an observation, not a criticism) this was more then compensated for by the details and maturing of the characters. And I didn't really mind the lagging climax (which could have been cut by a few hundred words in places).

All in all, an excellent effort. I feel odd writing a review for a story when the author hasn't visited the site in several years (and leaving the sequel on a cliffhanger), and yet, it feels natural. Well done.
JadeTyga chapter 15 . 11/28/2010
My name is Jade

yeah

I loved your story

yeah

you keep on writing

yeah

and don't make it gory

cause when I read

hmm?

I don't like to barf

uh huh

I'd rather enjoy

yeah

your work of art WOOH!

Great story and happy holidays from my desk to yours:D(also, the review below was from me:) it was my first one:3 hope you where able to read it;))

~JT_out
Guest chapter 15 . 7/8/2010
O ma god I just read da hole story n let me tell u it had me n tears half da time! It definately iz a new favorite uv mine nd I just wanted 2 say dat u betta keep writin stories cuz diz wiz so great it left me speechless... well maybe not speechless since I wrote all diz but hopefully u get ma point:) any way keep it up cuz u just earned urself n admierer:D
SilverSeas chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Aww, that first chapter is so sad, I nearly cried. Poor Buttercup! And Blossom's a bitch
xxskyWriterxx chapter 15 . 4/14/2009
I love this Buttercup story; great job.
a3256 chapter 10 . 4/8/2009
This is the best story anyone has written about powerpuff girls ever and the fact that buttercup is my favorite character is so joyful and I mostly see that I am like her , a little . By the fact of dressing boyish and having short hair , this is a big similarity with buttercup but I am the only child in our family and mostly I would act cold a dark and sometimes tough for some time before cooling down with my classmates , especially the one's who are "out of control" with clothes and celebrities and would tease any girl who is just being simple for no reason .Please keep this to yourself I am just a new member of this site and I haven't made a story yet . . . still waiting for my mom to say yes please don't share this to anyone else or remember the fact that I may kill you so bye . . . . :)
Red One1223 chapter 15 . 1/19/2009
THIS...WAS AWESOME...now I'm wondering if Blossom even knows about Jade at this point. It just seems like everyone else knows, but I just can't tell about Blossom...KEEP IT UP!
Anon chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
200th REVIEW!

I got hooked on this story a while ago, and nowadays, I read it every 2 months as my dedication to Buttercup. I'm glad you put her in the spotlight, since she doesn't get much attention. I
anonymous kid chapter 15 . 8/20/2008
This is one of the best PPG fanfics I've ever read. What made it also unique was that it didn't have the somewhat annoying RRB/PPG plot as usual. u r an amazing writer and i will remember this story for a long time.
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