Reviews for Naruto the REAL Fifth Hokage
Dark Serpent Cat chapter 26 . 5h
So I really enjoyed this fic and wish you hadn't stopped writing it and while I doubt I will hear back I was wondering if Naruto was going to use this event to improve his repertoire of ice style ninjutsu since he could create those techniques with his kekkie genkai and he really hasn't used ice style much which would have likely been useful in their environment
Guest chapter 4 . 11/19
You killed at the fourth chapter.
fatima343 chapter 26 . 11/10
More chapters please
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 26 . 11/6
So want more!
Shut Up I'm Evil chapter 23 . 10/27
Well done for the LittleKurribo reference my friend. Well done.
Luccian chapter 26 . 8/26
Kagenapped Naruto. Why am I not surprised...?
On another note, your "kill Akamaru for fun" line is going too far, even if it is an omake.
Also, I feel like a hypocrite because I feel offended that you'd write Hinata killing puppies but I have no qualms about the comment about Choji, even though eating problems are technically more worrying. Just a question though, why single out Choji? Why not the entire Akimichi Clan? Why not say "alongside Sakura, Sasuke, Choji, and the rest of his Clan?"
By the way, is this story dead?
Luccian chapter 18 . 8/26 made me cry. I never cry! Not really, but still, I don't remember ever crying while reading Naruto Fanfiction, come close to tears or start tearing up, sure, but ever cry. Brilliantly written, those parts about Sandaime-sama, but it still doesn't stop me from saying what I'm about to say. I HATE you. You made me cry! i HATE you! So, so much. Naruto fanfiction is supposed to be a lot of things but making me cry, that is not one of those things! Not that this chapter wasn't touching, mind you, I just hate you for making me so touched/upset/understanding that I cried.
Amon Kashino chapter 13 . 8/25
I'm sorry but I don't like this story its just trying to cram so much shit in at once and paint everyone in a good light bad guys secretly being good. The normal people that get bashed being redeemable and good. And everyone and I mean everyone is out of character... Might as well just wrote your own story with your own characters. I can't connect and enjoy the story when all my favorite characters are acting like someone else
Amon Kashino chapter 5 . 8/25
Nooooooo it was going so well but changing naruto physically so quickly has always annoyed me plus the girls are just plain two dimensional no character progression just poof we love naruto I'll read a bit more to see if it gets better but most stories like this don't maybe change naruto back and gradually work on his love life since that should come secondary to his hokage duties at the moment just my opinion
Juvart24 chapter 5 . 8/17
It started out okay, then the cliches started to pile up very quickly.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/15
The moment I read the two bloodlines and Kyubi having a human form, I stopped reading. And here I was thinking it was halfway decent.
darkemperor1 chapter 3 . 8/15
Wow... I mean first he becomes Hokage and now he's going to get married, damn, Naruto is 12 yet he's already got his life sorted.
darkemperor1 chapter 2 . 8/15
It seems like just yesterday when Naruto was a child, going around and pranking everyone as he shouted to the world that he'd be the Hokage one day, and now he's the Hokage.
XxElementalStormxX chapter 26 . 7/31
Pedro52 chapter 3 . 7/27
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