|Reviews for Delta|
| Stuch chapter 4 . 3/16/2011
It's all ticking along quite nicely, fleshing out the characters a bit. I'll admit I was worried you were going to cross over with the main canon - I think Sev meets up with a Delta Company when taking on the arc towers in Killzone2's campaign - and was glad that avoided the temptation.
Always more fun to write your own stuff anyway.
| Stuch chapter 3 . 3/13/2011
Down time is important and there's more time to learn about characters when bullets aren't flying over their heads. I like the back stories and would be interested to know why Z joined the ISA if not to get some payback like the other two.
| Stuch chapter 2 . 3/11/2011
Both of my criticisms of your prologue are fixed in this first chapter, fantastic. Keep it up.
| Stuch chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
A few grammar mistakes (your, you're) and messing up of the tenses. But other than that it's a good, solid opening. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.