|Reviews for Mine|
| chavamirjam chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
A lot is conferred with these little amount of words! Well done!
| mugglemom chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I love the intensity of the story. I am not a big fan of Edward/Jasper slash but I enjoyed this story. Great job at capturing the emotion.
| DarkOneBL chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Interesting start and I agree it would make a great intro if you where to continue with it. I would love to read more...
| Robpfan chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Hmmm... I love this, great intro for when you continue after the contest right? lol
And no mention of names either so it leaves it open so either one of them could be human...
good luck in the contest...
| cocoalvin chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
More please! That. Is. All.
| mauralee chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Oh, very nice. I love the last line.
| BOOKSvsFICS chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
it's a shame if this is already completed.. this would be a great intro to your story.. I hope you chose to continue, it has a lot of potential (:
| tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Ooooh, so Jas is a human, huh? LOVE IT!
I wanna see this continued sofa king bad. You HAVE to do more when this contest is over!