Reviews for Broken
OCDJen chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Poor Edward! That was gripping for under 400 words. Good luck in the contest!
Robpfan chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
I think you did really good with this... the girls want a story in 500 words or less that can make them feel an emotion... I think you nailed it with this...

Edward is broken to the point of giving up but finds the courage to overcome it and move on... RL isn't all about roses...

Good luck in the contest...

Take care
Tendarts chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Very angsty, almost depressing. Didn't like the way it ended, I even felt a bit down after this. But then again, the title says "Broken" and he truly is.
tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Oh man, that's messed up.

When the story was winding down, I thought Edward was gonna commit suicide or do something harmful to himself. I was very glad to see that he found the strength to move on and make something out of his life!