Reviews for The God Bows Down
Guest chapter 13 . 8/11
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Squarekiddo chapter 1 . 8/5
Horrible, its like a first draft, did you even proofread this? did you even make a plan for you story before posting this? Ugh, im sorry if it seems harsh, but I really dont understand why people wants to publish stories, but they dont care about the stories at the same time, its beyond me, it makes no sense.
Aureslifer chapter 13 . 7/8
Why this has been updated? ;(
Aureslifer chapter 3 . 7/8
Im loving this
Aureslifer chapter 1 . 7/8
Awesome! Im hoping for the harem
Guest chapter 3 . 5/25
it was aurosing
OriksGaming chapter 13 . 3/7
The first few chapters were decent, especially when I thought you had him paired with Konan, but it quickly went downhill, with Naruto being way too powerful right from the start and suddenly every girl is interested in him . . . so boring. Factor in all of the spelling and grammatical errors and your story needs a lot of work . . .
my 2 guys chapter 13 . 2/5
that was good keep the chapters coming
YahiKonaNagato21 chapter 4 . 1/20
Amusing...
YahiKonaNagato21 chapter 3 . 1/18
I hope they will eventually meet Yahiko.
YahiKonaNagato21 chapter 2 . 1/18
Awwwwwww, will Naruto, Nagato, and Konan be able to meet Yahiko?
YahiKonaNagato21 chapter 1 . 1/18
Very interesting indeed.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/14/2015
That's not how relations work, and please don't make him too overpowered.
Lisanna Ackerman chapter 12 . 10/29/2015
Umm,first off u gave names from bleach? I mean,Byakuya,Yoruichi,Soifon,Shinji,Kensei,Gin,Toshiro?! Who else is next? Ichigo!?
vhyung chapter 11 . 10/8/2015
I choose pairing 1 or 5
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