Reviews for Chance to be Whole
eli-dunbigboot chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Nice story. It's not often we get a Charlie story. I liked it. Good Luck!
HoochieMomma chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
This was thought-provoking and beautifully written. I'd like this to be extended further.

Good luck in the contest!
TKegl chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Very nicely done-well written, and a good use of the lyric prompt. Great job - good luck in the contest! :-)
tilly77 chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I liked this, the ending was neat (them working through the guilt etc so not knowing if the relationship is going to work out or not). I think you could take this further!
lynnherman chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Interesting story. Can't wait to see where you take it :o)