Reviews for Chicken Secrets
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
Nice!
BrightWatcher chapter 1 . 1/6
I loved this!

I must admit it was the appearance of Leon that really grabbed me. And then "I want to sing" happened and I was done for. XD

Good luck with your writers muse!
yay chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Arthur's reaction was pretty amusing.
Nance chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Hilarious. I wonder what happened the next day. The morning after the Chicken Secrets.
Weaving Bard chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Merlin finally got food that he likes :)
OliviaBe chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
That was amazingly written! You had me rolling with laughter through out so kudos on that! You are good at writing humor, even if you don't think you are, you are. You embody the characters so well. Your writing is so detailed, I can see each scene unfolding. It is just amazing. Thank you and please continue to write.
photo100 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Sooo funny!
dragoness simplicity chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Lol. Good story! XD

On a side note:

A sourpuss. In addition to the list of being a clotpole, prat, supercilious, condescending and overbearing. Very overbearing." Merlin said, smiling.

I think this sentence should start with quotation marks. I didn't actually know Merlin was supposed to be talking until I got to the end.

I assume it is supposed to be the same for:

-Care to repeat that?"

-Alright, Merlin...

-Go to sleep...

etc.

It could be that the uploading of the file has replaced " with -.

Just thought I should mention it in case you weren't aware.
StarryNight359 chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
LOL now i really want to know what a drunk merlin is like in the show XD
Here without you chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
First off you are amazing writer that is not the problem. The way you write dialogue is the problem. It is very distracting. I want to enjoy the story so much I tried really hard to ignore it but it just so annoying. I though it just this story but you do it with all your stories. I mean you could do it for the first few dialogue but for all of it just...please stop it.

Sorry but I do not think I could finish reading a beginning of a great story if you keeping doing that thing with dialogue.
satomika chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
i think it's the chicken secrets that did a number on merlin and leon...

sir leon is funny...

it made me remember about my drunk girl friend who was kissing my not-so-innocent guy friend... we're all friends, but really... when you're drunk, there's just no filter or any dam or rein that would hold your emotions and desires back...

i'm just glad i've never gotten drunk and hopefully, never will... i just hate the smell of alcohol...and the way they taste just makes me want to run towards the nearest comfort room...

i hope this fic's got a sequel coz i really like sir leon and gwaine... and i really want to know how the three drunks would face the next day...:)
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
That was great! I enjoyed it! Though, Gwaine is a really bad influence...just one drink. One drink my ass!
Yuki082 chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
tehehe very nice. thanks for writing!

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Yuki
Aria657 chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Adorable and sweet! I love Drunk Merlin, and drunk Leon and Gwaine just makes it even better!
Shere'Lifsil chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
HiHiHi, Leon sang, Merlin asked Gawain why he had the card in his sleeve...It was actually rather funny, even though there was no drunken fumbling at the end, Arthur wouldn't even carry him, maybe if we slipped him a tankard or two as well? That would be funny.

Though it wasn't hilarious it did have its moments where it was funny, with some practice you may have me rolling over the floor with laughter. And it was still good to read, so I liked it.

Please Keep Writing,
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