Reviews for Persuading
qyg chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
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3e7y0l chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
this is a good story. the way you wrote lorren was different then i usaully see him writen but i like it. update soon.
1234567890 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
this story was great pleaz put up chapter 2
Snowlia chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
AH it took me so long to review this, but I am getting on this now. I love this story so far, and I adore this pairing. Avalon has so many fun pairings available, doesn't it? This especially is a fun couple, love/hate can work so well if the right author is behind it. Their interaction was perfect, Logan's smug superiority, and Lorren's anxiety and forced authority trying to mask it. The tension was hot and intriguing and their kiss was intense and almost shocking. I am sure Lorren was shocked, even though he was the instigator. I love your portrayal of Lorren, it is very different then how we usually see him. I cannot wait to read more of it, you must post the update soon!

Snowlia