Reviews for Flatline
June27 chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
I'm going to need a whole lot of patience to wait and see what happens in the next chapter. The pain the horror.
Bow to your sensei chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
I love seeing Bella slowly recover her memories...I wonder, if she remembers seeing Carlisle for the first time in the ER, does she remember the reason she was there?
robsjenn chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
i'm not very patient either...except for stories with lots of UST, like this one. i'm seeing that light at the end of the tunnel...

thanks for writing!
fuzzyltlwingedthing chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
She must be shocked. Hopefully she'll remember how ga-ga she was... I have to keep reminding myself that she only knew him briefly before she turned. It makes a big difference in the story, doesn't it? You're doing a fabulous job, thanks!
wuogkat chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
Come on, Bella, just a fingertip. You know you want to...

katmom chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
Listen to JASPER, oh writer woman!

Not tooo much longer...LOL...sounds good to me!

SO glad she remembered some things...and turned to Edward for comfort, even if she isn't touching TOUCHING him...

aerobee82 chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
Ahh, thank God for Jasper. He's set my mind and emotions at ease a bit. I'm really curious as to what Bella's specific power is and why she doesn't want skin-to-skin contact happening.
samiam77 chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Are you still thinking that this will be 11 chapters?
edwardcu77en7over chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
Im glad Bella starts to remember... would she come find Charlie too? why is she afraid to have feelings for Edward? I think he has shown her how trustful he is...
mgefanfiction chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
She remembers! I'm so excited! I'm loving this storyline!
the captains wife chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
xSirenSongx chapter 9 . 4/15/2011
He didn't have to wait long to find out, hope that goes double for us readers. Wonder why she isn't saying anything about her memories of Edward, hmmm curious.
samiam77 chapter 8 . 4/15/2011
I'm enjoying reading this and am glad that they are finally talking.
Nissa-Cullen chapter 8 . 4/14/2011
Ice just read your story and I really like it. I can't wait to see what happens between Bella and Edward. It's been so long I doubt she will remember but maybe they can make some new memories. What exactly happened that made it so uncomfortable when Dimitri touched her?
Gabriels-girl5035 chapter 8 . 4/13/2011
really loving the story :] update!
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