Reviews for Flatline
Edward'sDJ chapter 8 . 2/26/2013
Tell Bella to touch Edward, please...
Edward'sDJ chapter 6 . 2/26/2013
Who could forget Edward?
Edward'sDJ chapter 5 . 2/26/2013
Poor Edward. I wonder how Bella feels?
Edward'sDJ chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
Evil woman!
Edward'sDJ chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
Is Bella wreaking a trail of devastation through California?
Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Fascinating start.
Camilla10 chapter 10 . 1/2/2013
Oh,I had missed it (Or I had forgotten. The perks of a bad memory). Glad that I found it, though.
NKubie chapter 10 . 12/30/2012
I know you seemed less than thrilled with this story, but I loved it! It was clear, intelligent, had a storyline that moved and it was an E/B story with an HEA; the last two being my prerequisites. Thanks for all of that and for sharing your talent!

NKubie chapter 9 . 12/30/2012
Oh come on, Bella. Touch the poor guy!

I'm so glad that at least she's remembering. Finally!
NKubie chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
Baby steps. Literally and figuratively.

Bella's survival instincts are amazing. She probably doesn't even realize she has the gift she does.

At least she's starting to open up and is obviously drawn to Edward as well.
NKubie chapter 7 . 12/29/2012
It's interesting how Bella interprets the Cullens' vegetarian ways.

I shudder to think how it was that Demetri "touched" Bella. Blech!

This is all very encouraging, though.
NKubie chapter 6 . 12/29/2012
Shit! I can't stop here either.

Eh, sleep schmeep. Vampires don't sleep. Why should I?

I'm thinking that her eyes are in fact red. But I wonder why she won't let Edward touch her. If she knows about mates, why would that be a bad thing?

I guess I'll find out soon enough.
NKubie chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Shit! Okay, one more. I hate that RL crap like sleep gets in my way of reading. Grrr.

Obviously, Bella is in Maine. But why? I really can't wait to find out!

I'm finding the 3rd person narrative really interesting. What made you decide to use that in addition from the EPOV? Cool literary tool.
NKubie chapter 4 . 12/29/2012
Okay, I'll give myself one more chapter because I just can't leave it there. How did the Volturi even find out about Bella? Was it because the Cullens were asking around about her?

Now my heart aches for both Edward and Alice. And Jasper for that matter. The guilt he must feel for not wanting to hunt with his own mate. No winners here. :(
NKubie chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
This is heartbreaking. Just the image of Edward curled up in his car, clutching Bella's pillowcases makes me so sad for him.

Again, glad it's complete.
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