Reviews for Flatline
HopeStreet chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
I am really looking forward to this story!
mickeymackey chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
great start. I always wondered what would happen if they just let the venom act how it should. Can't wait for the update.
KristinHazzard chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
OMG this is going to be great, I know it ;) My heart is racing right now! Can't wait for more.
wuogkat chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
yep, you're evil
Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I love this alteration. Edward changing BElla with the help of Carlisle near the beginning. I wonder how this will change their relationship.
Navygirl14 chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
WOW..really good..Can't wait to see what happens next...
Thats-So-Alex chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
You mean, another story that doesn't involve the Wolves? Wow, on a roll I see! :P

This is exciting already! I had to go and re-read the Drabble, but then I remembered! :D I'm really excited to see where this is gonna go. Just promise HEA? :P

Looking forward to more!
SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
that was PAINFULLY intense. can't wait for the next chapter.
Melolabel chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Oh. I like. I'm going to have to send you a link to a spoof video that goes from this point. It's pretty funny.
InsaneGrizzlies chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
*cackles gleefully* Yayayayay! You wrote a story for it and I am happy because this was a good beginning and okay, basically I just love what you write like some obsessive stalker person.

I'm also tired and wide-awake all at once and craving ice cream.

And I'm finding all sorts of bad messages - like never being happy with what you have, talk to and listen to strange freaky women, and lust at first sight is the same as love - in The Little Mermaid which my sister's watching. I was trying to sleep - on the couch; my bed is a storage unit - because as I said I'm tired, but the movie is noisy. So I couldn't sleep. And then everyone was talking and my sister was sitting on my feet area so I couldn't get comfortable and I'm still tired but not enough to fall asleep through all that.

I'm sort of a picky sleeper. It's hard enough sleeping on a couch. Ya know? LMAO.

ANYHOW... can't wait for more!
mgefanfiction chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
This looks very intriguing, I'm looking forward to the update!
CinnamonKitty chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
I am intrigued...look forward to the next part! Thank you!
Bow to your sensei chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Oh, when I saw the summary I just KNEW which of your "drabbles" this would lead to! Thank you sooo much for deciding to explore this one further! I. Am. So. Excited! :)

xSirenSongx chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
You left it there? You're evil! Awesome start and based on the summary, I'm even more curious. So next week you're updating, Sunday or Monday? _-

The language is listed as Spanish but I was reading it in did that work?
Christobel Cullen chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
LOVE it! So excited to see where you take it. We have to wait a WEEK? Not fair! :)
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