Reviews for Persona 4: Welcome to Tokyo
Guest chapter 41 . 2/13
Will you ever update?
everquesting chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
Why is it that just after souji finally manages to become a halfway likeable character the updates end?
Temperance XIV chapter 16 . 11/2/2014
Ha, Izanagi's back! And in style, too...
I can't help but keep reading.
Temperance XIV chapter 14 . 11/2/2014
Whoa... No Izanagi...?
That's an idea that I've never seen before, and it kinda scares me...
Zatheko chapter 41 . 10/13/2014
The stutter is too annoying, you really overdid it. It doesn't even seem like self esteem issues but a mental problem.
Guest chapter 41 . 10/13/2014
OK cmon 40 chapters in and he still talks with that stutter? Does he have some disease for that or something? At first I thought it was just him not having confidence but people with those issues don't stutter nearly half as much as he does.

Reread through this and just notice his stutters, they are WAY to hard to read with it like that and its annoying as hell.
kitanalao chapter 15 . 8/22/2014
remember my laat review.. we want the improvement... until this chapter i didn't found it yet. i still hope for you to continue... huft... i'll stop for now but i'll be back latter... hopefully when you update again. because just like i told you.. this is has a deep and good potential... it will shame if this is discontinue..
kitanalao chapter 14 . 8/22/2014
hum... a coward main character... i hope this is going better soon because so far the story had takken a step back... as amusing for me to watch 2 personas argue but this is indeed very different to the true story. i didn't mean to insult you of course. i just want to remind you that the character are back to zero... so please show us the improvement. i do hope to continue because this story has a good potential. it would be shame if this is stop...
kitanalao chapter 13 . 8/22/2014
to be honest... this story hadn't yet to show it'sparkle especially with the main protagonist... but ... so far you had succesfully exploring... good job also just remember to update. i checked last time you update is on december last year... so i hope you update...
kitanalao chapter 12 . 8/22/2014
hmm... i asking you if this alright to put another persona like nestis when your character is very much a coward? no offence but with 2 persona who has opposite personality will only give souji trouble especially with his current status... and i only suggested you for the element.. because right now... your story is a little weird. for my taste... and also some other reader... eventhough the plot indeed really are very intriguing and interesting. well... i only hope my critics didn't make you stop writting because this is indeed good story.
kitanalao chapter 11 . 8/22/2014
for the plot in this chapter i had this nicely change but YOU sjold really start making progress on souji's characteristic because seriously... souji is very coward and pathetic in this story even so far...
kitanalao chapter 10 . 8/21/2014
hmm... it is intriguing... i like the way chie lie to the employer...
kitanalao chapter 9 . 8/21/2014
nice creativity in this chapter... to be honest this is ineed intriguing story. if i have to based on from the game souji already in 2nd level for knowledge. while the other status in the 1st level. so so far it is nice progress... again i will again remain you please update since this is a little long already...
kitanalao chapter 8 . 8/21/2014
hmm... nice development. you still follow the true story. but i am corious how you handle 2 main plot in this story. again i want to tell you to update because. i am sure there is other reader waiting as well...
kitanalao chapter 7 . 8/21/2014
hmm... to be honest... you actually put something interesting in this chapter by puting 2 main conflict and so far you had explored nicely... since you take the most challenging character here. with making souji even more timid than in the true story... i expect improvement.. and yeah... i noticed you didn't update for sometime i hope you update. so please update...
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