Very well written.

Very good story!

The last few paragraph s of this chapter were terrible

this story is perfection, in how different it all could have been, with just one choice. beautifully written. :)

I have to say, this story is just completely and utterly amazing.

I love that you used one of the most underrated characters in naruto and had everything spiral into a beautiful plot. Her character is amazing, and the fact that there's so much emphasis on how long she's been a housewife, makes her skills seem so much more impressive.

The political touches and how you underline the subtlety women did just made me fall in love with the story even more.

My only complaint is that for about the last half of the story Naruto just sort of...slipped away. I understand that he's not a main character for the story, but the sudden loss was just...weird I guess. However, you made up for it by the masterful inclusions of other characters and your portrayal of Itachi.

I hope the sequel is just as thought provoking and passionate as this one.

Your annoying fan,
luvthesea17

It just occurred to me that, amongst the descendants of the Sage of Six Paths, the Uzumaki are literally the red-headed step children.

While the story started slowly it quickly grew more and more interesting and at Mikotos fight against Madara I read the same sentence twice so I wouldn't miss anything.

Great work!

Great story, among the better Naruto stories I have read where he is not the main character. Propaply read to few of those. Thank you for your excellent story telling.

Its really good. I enjoyed reading it!

Stunned to stupidity by the awesomeness that is your Mikoto Uchiha. Wow. This is an amazingly exciting story.

So mama Uchiha is totally bad ass and I have no idea why she isn't always portrayed this way. She was definitely a character completely unappreciated by me, I have learned my lesson. Thanks for introducing to something great and new which to be honest as long as I've been on this site is getting harder and harder to find. Basically what I'm saying is keep writing you entertain me :) lol

Lovely, absolutely.

Lovely.

I read your A/N and decided that I was already in love. Hopefully, it'll be as good as can be.

ALL GLORY TO MIKOTO