Reviews for Be careful what you wish for
killerfox116 chapter 6 . 9/18
I have to admit that I laughed way to hard at that Castlevania SOTN joke very good story so far I hope it only gets better.
Myra the Vulpix chapter 1 . 8/29
"My dead Katie."
I live for these typos.
Seems good. Keep writing!
hga chapter 10 . 7/9
It pleases me to write that this is a especially beautiful chapter in the best fanfic I'm currently reading. More later, I hope.
Celestia's Paladin chapter 42 . 6/11
There, reread the whole story... And no update since February of last year. Damn, and things are getting interesting, again, too.
AkaruiNagaiyumi chapter 1 . 5/21
... i got this feeling that yuka didnt show louise her powers on purpose just to see how shocked she would be when she find out...
Danku Mimisu chapter 3 . 4/28
"Per say"
U wot m9
Guest chapter 6 . 3/18
I wish this story would update, I love it so much
ScGonzaga chapter 2 . 1/30
But good story line
ScGonzaga chapter 2 . 1/30
I'm kinda confused is yuka a boy now?
Guest chapter 5 . 1/24
James Birdsong chapter 42 . 12/13/2015
There are some typos in the story but the story is excellent
Kythorian chapter 4 . 11/30/2015
So this story is fairly well written, but I really can't read any further. You are sticking WAY too close to the stations if canon. Yuka is fairly powerful, and yet somehow 'he' manages to change absolutely nothing about the plot. The exact same basic events happen, and yuka's incredible power somehow fail to change anything. I was willing to go with it until this chapter, but how exactly did he let fouquet escape? He appears to have just decided to stand there for absolutely no reason while fouquet ran away. So apparently you have decided to just force the characters to be idiots whenever it is necessary to make the story go exactly like it did in canon. This really ruins the story. It's unfortunate because the story had a lot of potential, but I don't see the point in reading a rehash of canon, especially when it should be so different with such a different and more powerful character.
Akritedes chapter 21 . 11/13/2015
I feel obligated to point out that this arc ending is an exceptional ass-pull that relies on coincidences or unexplained deviations from plausible behavior on the part of multiple individuals. One is excusable, two stretches suspension of disbelief, and three makes the reader wonder whether you drank the special kool-aid.
WodofGar chapter 42 . 10/16/2015
Not sure how I missed this chapter.
Scheming Meemz is best Meemz.
You do cliffhangers too well, stahp.
Swordalfgun chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
Isn't yuka a girl...
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