|Reviews for jazz jackrabbit: A Hero Is Born|
| Lone The Dark Hearted Wolf chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
okay you crtic my work when your work i can't even make sense of so you better stop crticing and start acting like a mauture adult i acually asked permission from all my stories and guess what i read them all and then compare them to the people i asked permission to write from so tell me this how can you critique if you did not get my permission i mean yeah it is your opinion but fight this over lets see 300 views to your what ever it barley makes sense and don't get me wrong i like the authors you chose just write like them and one more thing DON'T CRTIQUE REDTAILS102'S WORK (MY WORK).
| Womboman chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
So, after being on this site for almost two years, you finally decide to write a story. Well sir, good for you.
Have no clue what the story is from but whatever. Seems like a big prolouge I'm going to guess this was just a big overview and then you'll tell the story but I'm only guessing
Planet Carrotus. That honestly sounds like the lamest name for a planet full of rabbits. Like, really? Carrotus? Just add a "U" in it, it'll be fine, trust me.
Lol, but I shall read more if the story doesn't bore the fuck out of me. Just like any other story.
BTW thanks for mentioning me on your profile. Makes me feel good!
| Titan 386 chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
So you've decided to do your own story, good on you. I'll keep tabs on this story.
| Daedalus370 chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Most intriguing, Bryan, and congrats for your first story on the site, regardless of whether or not it is a quick summary. It was quite nice, and went through all of the important details and then some. I sort of wished that you elaborated on certain things, as I was piqued on Jazz's helping the rats and the bar scene, but everything was still pretty interesting. Well done, bud; I hope to see more from you soon.
Also, I love how similar the disclaimer looks. P Happy reading and writing, mate!