|Reviews for Dusty Footprints in Time|
| CdB55 chapter 17 . 6/20/2013
One of the things that I really like about this author, Athena Mou, is the way she both understands and is able to convey a person's insecurities. It strikes home with with the way I have felt, or my friends have felt, at various times of our lives. This is what Athena Mou gives us which is beyond simply fan fiction, and is more in line with what a good fiction writer can do.
| ellabellbee chapter 18 . 4/5/2013
Well, that was just ridiculously fluffy, and exactly what I was looking for this afternoon. Good job!
| Gabrielle chapter 18 . 3/18/2013
It such a beautiful story and it almost pains me to see it comes to an end.
It was lovely written! Thank you for creating it and sharing it with us
| FaBbEr0oZ chapter 18 . 10/24/2012
I absolutely love this story!
| Mrs. 11th chapter 18 . 6/19/2012
This was such an amazing story! I was seriously freaking out (like jumping around shrieking) when Helen Magnus showed up, by the way.
| endgirl chapter 18 . 5/7/2012
Mawww, this was all kinds of awesome and adorable. I love the idea of Myka and HG starting a family - and what a great idea to utilize Charles! Very well done, thanks for sharing this :)
| vanpike chapter 18 . 2/28/2012
une histoire magnifique, agréable de lire une histoire qui ma permis de ressentir autant d'émotion!
et sourtout continue a écrire..
| DarXe chapter 18 . 12/31/2011
I love this story. I wish were never ending. I do believe its my new favorite. :)
| Quemak chapter 15 . 11/10/2011
Great story. Having gone through labor myself, I love the part about just wanting to beam the baby out!
| macgamer chapter 18 . 10/11/2011
Wonderful story and nice twists on the Wels family and HG's life. Love her and Myka together. I can only imagine the amazing adventures that HG and she would have, and could definitely see Carolyn following in her parent's fotsteps as a waehouse agent when she's old enough.
| NinjaDriver chapter 18 . 9/27/2011
I just finished the whole story and sweet baby J your one hell of a good damn writer! This was amazing!I look forward to more of your work! :) thank you for sharing! This was a stunning story!
| Willow008 chapter 18 . 9/27/2011
This was a great story, I loved it thanks
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/24/2011
Awe, Pete - after HG he's my favorite character on the show, I love his humor all of the time! Not to mention he looks great shirtless, but that's another matter. :) Awe, she loves Pete's gift, I wonder what the others got for her; somehow, even though she's one, I see Claudia's gift being an electronic one. Hahaha. "Did you knock her up again?" Pete joked." - love him! :) Claudia would probably be the one teaching her how to build the Tesla just to shoot Pete with; the family dynamic is something that certainly makes this show worth watching and I'm SO glad SyFy has decided to keep it on the network. Now we just have to get ready for the proposed HG spin-off show and whatever it may be - prequel to Warehouse 13 with her adventures (hope some of my Eureka members end up over there especially Jo and Fargo) from Warehouse 12 and before or just a show now about the Regents making her work off her sentence for all the crimes she's committed recently! Can't wait to watch whatever it may be; HG is definitely my most favorite character from the series! :D "I love them dearly. In a sort of pet like way," she said with a teasing smirk." - like when HG and Pete take shots at each other, her wit mixed with his humor equals some real great fights from what I've noticed so far on the series. Nice ending; I really feel bad for HG at times with the whole Christina thing, all she wants to do is save her kid - you can't fault her for that, yeah she has questionable methods about how she achieves the goal but you can certainly understand why she would want to achieve it. She's very much a tragic figure one could say, maybe one day she'll be able to pull it all off; for the sake of her mental well-being I'd hope so because you can see how much the girl means to her and how others sometimes use that fact sadly against her to control her for their own reasons. This was a great, fun ride and I really enjoyed it; I hope you'll write more HG/Myka with the Warehouse gang stories in the future. Thanks for all the previous fun and enjoyment, I had a blast! :D
| Kahlan35 chapter 18 . 9/24/2011
Wonderful story. At least Myka and Helena can be together in fanfiction :) I truly enjoyed the entire story and seeing their lives together. Hope to see more Myka/Helena stories from you!
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/22/2011
Are we sure Myka will be rushing back to work? She kind of has the stay at home for a few extra weeks to make sure the kid really likes her and loves her vibe to her, but maybe that's just me. What if the kid didn't like her as much as she did HG? Oh, future story idea you can TOTALLY steal - girl comes from the future (it's the Warehouse, anything can be in there to make that happens) saying she's there to stop an evil rogue Warehouse agent from destroying the future of Warehouse as well as many agents and civilians, no one knows yet she's HG/Myka's kid, Pete thinks it's HG that's gone bad again (because it's always fun to watch them fight; future girl makes subtle comments about what good HG does in the future but does let Pete off with most things so as not to tip her hat, plus she tolerates/likes her "uncle Pete" - "aunt Claudia" also a big favorite) putting doubt in her mind that maybe she could be it - Myka assures her she couldn't do it again because she said she would never once they were together (Myka always believes in her good side it seems at the end of the day); tension builds all the while their future daughter is really there to take out Myka because she blames her for something that happens in the future be it with HG or what have you - thus revealing her real identity and real mission - revenge. I don't know, just a plot idea in my head with all the HG/Myka babies running around and figured why not pass the idea on to someone who could actually make it come into light possibly. :D
Anyways, review time! :)
"She gently touched the locket around her neck. It now held two pictures, the old one of the child she would never forget, and one of her new family, her beautiful wife and daughter." - love that part, very sweet and HG like. :) It's a good thing Carolyn is a good travel baby, can you image poor Myka having to be like the parents she so hated before and apologizing all the time for their child's behavior on a flight? Ha. Can't blame the baby, who doesn't love HG's voice? So soothing...very dreamy too, hahaha; "Wailing Wells" and "Bering Banshee" - have to love those two together, quite the couple that's for sure. :) I like Myka wanting to always be close to her kid, it's sweet...no matter how they might turn out in the future, again she's always willing to try and see the good in people first and foremost; wonder when Pete and Claudia will start fighting over who gets to watch the kid next even if it's just for a little while...that'd be cute to see. I since Carolyn might be a bit of a charmer like her mothers; bet she even melts Artie's heart despite the fact she's part Wells. Ha. :)
Like Leena helping Myka out, always nice to see; haha, HG flinging the book, just as well she's probably either read it before or wrote it in some way in the past so no need to lose out on the important things like a naked Myka in her bed! :) A very sweet chapter update, I look forward very much to the next one; CAN'T WAIT!