Reviews for Consequences
moniquecullen chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Wow. I never thought I could hate Edward, but yep,this one has done the trick. Poor Bella :(
TKegl chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Oh, what a heartbreaker! I could really see this story being continued as Edward tries to find Bella and his daughter, and to make some kind of amends.

Great use of the inspiration lyrics - good luck in the contest!
Twisted Musalih chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
That is so sad. Poor Bella. Hope u contiue it
Palikane87 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Please continue this. It was so well-written and heartbreaking but I don't want him to be like this forever. Will he ever find Bella and his lost daughter? This would make a really good story if you decide to write more.
Bunch2009 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
What an amazingly heartbreaking story. I hope you will continue it. Loved it!
IcarusToSun chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
OMG! What an amazing story! I couldn't get over the intensity of it! I can't wait for you to expand it. Thank you for writing this.

SparklesforMarkel chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I loved this story. I really hope you continue it!
turmy chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I really like this. I wish you would consider expanding on it. Would really like to see where it could go.