Reviews for Sweet Nothings
smartyjonescrzy chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Wow. That was...perfect. You captured the poignance and tragedy of Annie's story so simply with this little vignette. I applaud you. Their love was so new and so young when he died, that Annie had to live those 40 plus remaining years of her life looking back on the rare snatches of moments they shared together, like the one you described here. The sadness and the intensity of their love comes off beautifully. Your detailing was beautiful. Enough to capture the beauty of the scene and the view of the world from a lover's point of view, but not so much that it became defilingly mushy. This was terrific. I absolutely loved this!

smarty
Anntrell chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
aww this was such a sweet story. This is how I like to write romantic stories..but my friends hate when I write all sweet and no heartache. My friends read dis n dey thought is was good. They love em sum Robert lolz :)