Reviews for Phenomenal Expectation
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
I'm not going to lie. I actually didn't even read the chapter. The summary seemed interesting but you didn't even spell college right. That for me is a big story turn off.
lilmstran chapter 7 . 11/22/2014
loved it
keep going
can't wait to read more
Guest chapter 2 . 5/26/2014
Quality guy? Not!
What a grade A c**t.
Slut Bella deserves him.
lilmstran chapter 11 . 5/24/2014
loved it
keep going
can't wait to read more
Scattycow chapter 2 . 5/20/2014
You ae obviously extremely young. This is immaturity at it's best. Stick to T rated. The average 13 year old on this site will eat this up, the rest of us? Not so much.
xXtWiLiGhTcRaZyXx chapter 11 . 3/25/2012
I know you touched this story in months but I really think you should try to finish this story because it is hilarious and I would love to see what happens next.
Blair.Alice. CullenLuvr chapter 11 . 2/22/2012
update soon
Mrs. Dimitri Belikova chapter 10 . 6/10/2011
OMG, Charlie is such an ass! I hope that Bella can see and talk to him before he does something stupid! Up date soon!
crazy-chick-4life chapter 10 . 5/23/2011
No man wow the wow love it
lucy chapter 10 . 5/23/2011
Noooooooooo! Charlie ruined it... what a bitch

ooooops I've just called a man "bitch"

Well he deserved it... please update soon I really want to continue reading this story I think it's very interesting

But every bad moment has a good one behind soooo... here I am waiting for them to go back together, yay!
lucy chapter 8 . 5/23/2011

Beautiful end of chapter I can't believe Edward finally talked to Bella

Ha ha ha I always get excited when Edward and Bella make up after a fight. I'm such a big fan of them they're perfect for each other...

I think it's a very good story thank you for writing it

Sooooo... I'll continue reading
lilmstran chapter 10 . 5/23/2011
loved it

so sad how charlie made edward think bella no longer wants him

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter
Ziario chapter 10 . 5/23/2011
Love it, good twist with having Charlie send the text cant wait to see what Edward does next update soon :) xx
Leibeezer chapter 10 . 5/23/2011
Esme was a bitch! Why did Edward say that she just turned 17 when last chapter it said that Bella would be 18 in a month. I'm hoping that Edward won't listen to that text and keep trying to contact her. Charlie is an asshole and I hope that Bella finds out about it soon.
lilmstran chapter 9 . 5/19/2011
loved it

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter
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