You know. I really wish there were rings like that. Not to force people to marry but rings that showed the most important moments between a couple without it being some tacky charm bracelet. I loved your explanations for each band on the ring. Very cool. I loved the story too. I felt so sorry for harry and angry about what had been done to him. But yay, happy ending!

Wow I think I can actually feel the jealousy in the chapter..you portrayed that well..and Laura she makes a good character..I'm actualy liking her but not enough for her to be with my Draco

Finally they kiss:)

Well jeez I'm anxious to read what's next

back to reading

I kinda feel like this is Draco's eleven year old self..and I like it:)

Now it's really getting interesting..I think I love narcissa in this

Very well done. I was sucked in from the start and couldn't stop reading even when my eyes burned. Fabulous. I love how you wove the multiple story lines together. And the symbolism you used with the rings and the magic. Simply wonderful!

OH MY GOD! I don't usually like the novel length fics but HOLY CRAP! You had me sucked in from the first chapter and I just fell completely in love with this fic. And the whole beast that was eating Harry just gave me chills. Wonderful fic!

Wah, finished reading at last! Well done for writing such a long, complicated, gripping and interesting fanfiction. :) I enjoyed reading it. :)

I read this entire story in 3 days. I just have to say thank you. I have never screamed during a story as much as I have screamed reading this one. Hahaha. I could not stop reading it, unless I got to a part that made me giddy or embarrassed, in which case I took a short break and then managed to make myself read more. :)

This was incredibly well-written, and definitely the most interesting Harry Potter story I have ever read. I envy your creative mind!

Long story short: I freaking loved this.

OMGZ. This story has been my life for the past 4 days, with the minor inconveniences of college and life :/ At first, when Harry was so adamantly in love with Ginny, and Draco was so set on Astoria, I thought, 'there's no way they'll be able to go from this to loving each other." It seemed impossible. And then when you brought Laura and Ian into the picture, it seemed even more unlikely! And yet, you did it! In a slow, calculated way, that wasn't rushed or forced, or unbelievable, you brought Draco and Harry together, in love!

I also loved the small references there were to the cannon HP, like, the gifts of a new broomstick and enchanted mirror. There are a lot of authors who don't do this. It was like a respectful nod to J.K's story, while still making it your own. You captured this perfectly when you said the two hardest things Harry had ever done was walking into the forbidden forrest to face his death, and defeating the beast. One difficult task from J.K's story, and one from yours.

All in all, it was a true pleasure to read. Very, very well done.

Brilliant writing, just as good as I expected. Completely unpredictable in some ways, but it certainly worked perfectly.

Thanks for writing this!

Amazinf story! I couldn't stop reading it :) I always admire people like you :) To me it seems unbelievable tha somebody can come up with story like this ant write it like this.. It was simply magnificent :)

wonderful story

Good story overall, but the ending felt like it was lacking a bit, but didn't affect the enjotment of the story.

-bongomonkeys