|Reviews for Photo Shoot|
| LouiseUchiha chapter 25 . 1/9
This story was wonderful!
I really love your NaruSasu stories!
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/31/2013
The fic isn't bad. I do like that it's not rushing the main pairing. But overall, it's a little too cheesy for me. A few of the things that aren't quite working for me:
I'm not a fan of Itachi being paired with human Kyuubi (it is corny), though you aren't the first fic writer to do this. But what bugs me about it in this particular fic is that I find the KyuuItaKyuu to be sort of tacked-on. Naruto was denying his feelings for Sasuke, and then all of the sudden, the older brothers are also in love. When I read it, it felt like "oh...okay?" If I hadn't seen the pairings listed for the fic, I would have been totally surprised by it.
The main pairing as well, is also somewhat cheesy. The way, somehow, Naruto gets Sasuke to be himself and tell him personal things all because of his...Naruto-ness alone? (Like really, what has he actually done to cause such a great transformation in Sasuke?) It's like, they've gotten to know each other just because that's what the fic wants them to do, and not because they really have a connection. It's all very cute, but not very convincing.
Instead, the fic is relying on all the old stand-bys to get this couple to fall in love (arguments, denial, and coincidences). That's why a lot of the stuff that's happened so far is really predictable: All the petty arguments, the annoying way everyone has to be in denial over their feelings, even the very long and dragged out process to get the photoshoot done (an obvious excuse to make them hang out a lot). In a lot of ways, I feel like I've read this fic before when I know I haven't.
Besides that, I don't find the story very realistic when it comes to the technical details. It doesn't seem like you did any research into how journalists work because I can tell you real interviews don't take this long. No one would ever agree to them if they were this much of an imposition on the subject. (And the subject and the interviewer definitely aren't supposed to be friends, or even friendly. That protects people on both sides, the person doing the interview and the interviewer as well. The whole thing should be professional and businesslike. THAT puts the subject at ease, not being his/her buddy.)
Anyway, I don't want to sound like I'm trashing the fic because I don't find it bad, just sort of mediocre. I feel like with a little more effort, it could have been a lot better (a little more research on the technical stuff, a little less reliance on cliches, a little more originality).
| spbv147 chapter 25 . 9/11/2013
i am speechles... i absolutly adore you and this story!_
although i would love to read a full detailed sex scene of naruto and sasuke...(i'm such a prvert/)
this story is magnificent and i will recomend it to everybody i know!
| spbv147 chapter 19 . 9/10/2013
"Yep, he's clueless," that is the funnyest line ever!_
| berry5tz chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Yay! I love this story. I love how , Naruto, has a older brother in this message one.
| Huge Fan chapter 25 . 8/4/2013
youve done a great job! i usually love lemon and smut but THIS is brilliant! thank you very much it entertained me a lot :3
| the-darker-side-of-things chapter 25 . 7/26/2013
U should make a sequel :P
| Somebody who is crazy chapter 25 . 7/11/2013
Amazing ! I love this story! I discovered it on deviant art but i'm glad you published it on fanfiction Now i just have to wait for Cassy-F-E to see the pictures !
| brokenfromthepast chapter 25 . 12/9/2012
This is really great! I really liked how their relationship was like a maze.
| HinaKicksAss chapter 25 . 12/9/2012
Loved this... Can't wait for you to continue the doujinshi...
| Sisarre chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
aaaaahhh Drunk Sasu-chan is just tooooooo cccuuutttteeee xD
| Sisarre chapter 4 . 7/30/2012
Nice chapter but what kind of tattoo does Sasuke has? a flowers,skull...What is it? Somting small somthing big O.o maybe a name? O.O
| Surreal Yume chapter 25 . 7/14/2012
I always find myself rereading this lovely story 3
| MissJudged16 chapter 25 . 7/1/2012
Excellent! I wish there were more lemons, but that's just because I'm a super duper perv. Anyway... great job! Loved the story and plot. It was well done.
| kezzie369 chapter 25 . 6/26/2012
WHY IS THIS RATED M!