Reviews for Air
Krudt chapter 4 . 3/15/2011
I like it, very much. Thank you for sharing. Hooray!
LisaLoo chapter 4 . 3/15/2011
Sigh. Why do I freaking love his last line? Yummy.
cejsmom chapter 4 . 3/15/2011
I think you called this Air cuz that is what it is, a breath of fresh air.
Darcyfan14 chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
Thank god she didn't had sex with him. Really interesting story.i can't wait for the next chapter.
MasenCullen chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
1. He lost the piece of paper? Riiiiiiiight.

2. Does the nineteen year old want the same things as the tweny nine year old? I mean, he owns his own business and I'm sure she's in college or something, right? I can't wait to watch this story unfold.

MasenCullen chapter 2 . 3/15/2011
Well, well. Older Edward meets younger Bella. I like that he's more mature and doesn't nail everything that is in arm's length.
blackagurl chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
Great update i like the slow build of this...
MasenCullen chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
He's not very talkative is he? Oh well, I'll wait.
lynnpepper77 chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
awwwwww, they seem really sweet on each other. Can't wait for the next update:)
Valleegrl chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
Hmm dis he really lose the paper with his number...or did he think maybe their age different of 10 years was too much?
MissWinkles chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
Wow, I didn't think Edward was that much older. Not that i'm complaining. It's hot. Looking forward to their date! xxx
BLilTXgirl chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
I love that he tells her up front he's not punctual. Hopefully it will keep her from doubting him & herself if he's not there until 9:22. LOL
maizeandblueinvalpo chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
I didn't remember him being 29. I do like that he was up front about not being on time.
drlena chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
So good as usual...

I wonder if Bella is a student?
zkcej chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
she slept nakid with him! O.o wow lols

and stupid paper why does it lose itself lmaooo!
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