Reviews for Air
pipelynn chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Sigh... I love this E and B. I had forgotten the age difference
meadow11 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
oh... a nice little age gap there... I love an older Edward...

did he really lose her number? or was he just freaking out a little... can't wait to see how things progress...
TessLouise chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
I love the "I'm not punctual" warning. Seriously, guys, that's all we want! 9-ish. Don't freak out if its 9:18, ok? ITS AS SIMPLE AS THAT! Ok, I apparently feel much more strongly about that than I thought. :)
lbrezette chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
This is going to be yummy...
nuanprong chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Seems sweet so far...the age gap doesn't seem so bad..but when you're 19...29 seems so far away. Can't wait to read more
hknat chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
I like this Edward. He seems very relaxed and just goes with the flow. I like that Bella keeps putting herself out there, not shying away from what she wants.
Comfy Boots chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Thanks for Edward being in his late 20s ;) I'm really liking it although I have a feeling these two might get a bit of trouble from people for the age gap...
InTheNameOfLovex chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Somethings just incredibly hot about a 29 year old Edward and a 19 year old Bella. I'm weird, I know haha
readingisbliss chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
I'm smitten too :) I love how this story makes me smile.

I seriously don't know how Bella resisted The Pretty, but it's probably a good thing.

I'm loving the quick updates! Thanks.
suzy 2010 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Bella is so sweet,she wants to be careful Edward doesn't hurt her .Edward being that much older than her.
beegurl13 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Oh, I love it! :D I'm kinda glad she didn't sleep with him that first night. It'll be better later on, after she knows him a little bit more. :D I like the age difference and I wonder what they both think of it. :)

Great job! I loved it! :) I also love Vanilla Coke, just so you know. :P
Caarz chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Oh damn, they didn't sleep with each other ;)
Alliecat N Heat chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
i think i might be having a senior moment but i'm not getting the titles of the chapters. Although i am enjoying them.i love that they do the do as much as i love a lemon. i like that he told her he's not punctual (me either) at least she won't be sitting thinking he stood her up if he's late. I can't wait for the next update.
Clynne chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Oh goodness! LOL He really didn't date younger girls and looky here who is 10 years younger. hehe Oh and lost that paper my ass, like he couldn't have gotten Riley to get her number for him. Hmmmm Would love to see what he is thinking.
agipe chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Eeek! I don't really like Edwards warning about not being punctual! I really hope the next chapter is in Edwards POV... I would kill to know what was going on in his head when Bella stopped what they were doing! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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