Reviews for Air
Facile chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
I didn't expect the age difference. I knew he was older, but I didn't think he was that much older. I'm cool with it, I was just surprised.

I have the feeling I'm going to love this fic.

"And now I was hyper-aware, my skin almost raw with his nearness, anxiety effervescing up through my belly like champagne bubbles." - I can definitely relate to that.

Thanks for sharing!
gabs9 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Loved it.
i.luv.twilight2 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
He told her he wasn't punctual? That's funny. Good start to the story.
divyvicki chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Like the way this story is heading. Cute beginning
moniquecullen chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
I read this story as a witfit,but I loved it so I'm gonna read it again ;) I can't wait for the schmexin. It's so hot.
mrsm0803 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Glad they didn't sleep together straight away. Definitely sweet so far.
BilliCullen chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
10 years older huh?


I am looking forward to more!
kms1979 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Le sigh. It doesn't matter how many times I've read this story, and I often go back to your witfits just for this prompt. It still makes me sigh.
apricot30 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
He's 29! Wow.. But I'm not saying it's old. I just didn't expect him to be that old compared to Bella. Still, it's cool. I can even imagine myself being as giddy as Bella was that an older guy is into me. I thought they were gonna do it already! I dunno if I should be thankful or not that it didn't happen. Hahaha :p Loved the update as always. Do you have a facebook acct?
Hadley Hemingway chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
My dear one - I just love, love, love your writing and this story, of course, already has its place under my skin. As I hang on your every word when I read your work, please let me know - did you already forewarn me (us) that you'd be writing short, frequent updates on this one? I just have to know so I can prepare myself ...;) I know I'm just your silly fanfic reading fool...heh heh Thanks so much for your always-lovely work. hh
Iwant2sparkle chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
How come you always manage to make me smile at the end of every. single. chapter you write? 3
pipelynn chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Sigh... I love this E and B. I had forgotten the age difference
meadow11 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
oh... a nice little age gap there... I love an older Edward...

did he really lose her number? or was he just freaking out a little... can't wait to see how things progress...
TessLouise chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
I love the "I'm not punctual" warning. Seriously, guys, that's all we want! 9-ish. Don't freak out if its 9:18, ok? ITS AS SIMPLE AS THAT! Ok, I apparently feel much more strongly about that than I thought. :)
lbrezette chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
This is going to be yummy...
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