Reviews for Hau Kea Kalikimaka |
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![]() ![]() Very cute story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet glad I found it. You are a good writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw that was a nice thing Steve did for Danny. They are really good friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. That's so adorable. Good Steve. And, as always, funny Danny. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this was so sweet! I love thoughtful Steve. I'm glad he found Danny some snow and took his mind off missing Grace for a little while. Great job with the banter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) As always love your writting! Really enjoyed the story! I think Steve would so do something like that for Danny! And loved the break-in at the end... it was just so 5-0!;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww, great story. when i read the part about going somewhere cold, i immediately thought of mauna kea. that place is amazing; i miss the big island, heck hawaii in general! again, good job & thanks for a wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! It finally let me log in so I can review your stories. I went on a feeding frenzy today, and I love the way you understand Steve & Danny's partnership. This story was beautiful! Either you've been to Hawaii a lot, or you do a lot of research. It really feels like you know Hawaii. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved that! It was super cute. Sad that Grace wasn't with Danny for Christmas. But very nice for the partners to have some fun together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew that there was an observatory on Hawaii and that the mountain had snow on it. Don't think I would have thought to use the setting to give Danny a white Christmas! Great idea! Thanks for writing it! Love the interaction between Steve and Danny, as usual. Funny bit with the pilot reading a novel on his iPhone. (Product placement! Ha!) Loved Dr. Peebles: "The stars wait for no man," Peebles said cryptically." (Which confirmed my guess as to where they were going.) Now we get a snowballl fight! Yay! Liked that Danny had the advantage here. :-D Nice bit with Steve telling the cops that Danny had to call his daughter at EXACTLY 2:30. And, one of the best lines EVER: "...like an unoiled machine, complaining all the way..." Good work. Now, crank out a few more stories! Your fans are waiting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ya never know, someone might just think up a reason for Danny to see snow around Christmas...:) Really cute. Loved how Danny could win on the snowball fight because he understood how to pack and throw them. Really enjoyable. Seems like you could write a sequel on just what happened to the poor idiots that decided to break a window while our favorite pair was on the property. Excellent writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was too great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your kind of product placement. You didn't say what kind of phone it was. The idea of Christmas on the mountain was great, and heartwarming. |