Reviews for Hau Kea Kalikimaka
Synbou chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
I loved this piece. The storyline was very original. You write Danny and Steve very well. I also noticed that you make areat use of your OC. They are there to support and make the main characters shine. I really enjoy that.

Thanks for sharing!
star trek nutcase chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
What a wonderful Xmas story! Glad you included Steve's smirk - love, love the smirk - he can convey alot with it. And really enjoyed the whole idea that Steve would put enough thought and effort into such a trip, even just a brief one, for Danny. Great job.
moonjat54 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Oh I really liked this one. A great future holiday story. You are right, Danny is a good detective, I am sure that Steve was feeling rather alone that holiday as well.
jodm chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Great story! Snow in Hawaii! Ya think! Actually, I really enjoyed the way you portrayed the friendship between Steve and Danny. I'm definitely looking forward to more of your tales.
pixiegold chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Awsome story. An unoiled machine, LOL.
HBSpud chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Love it. I hope to see the observatory when I am in Hawaii this fall.
ubicaritas chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Continuity? Who needs continuity when you've got a great story like this that wanted to be told? Very nicely done!
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