|Reviews for In The End|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
This is a really intelligent and creative story.
This story has real potential to become something great, don't let it go to waste or screw it up with bad storylines or going against Susan's characters.
Keep going, im interested to see what you write.
| ScarletDevil1503 chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
YES! I smell potential.
I've always wondered about Susan, as well. This is an intriguing side-story you've created, that I'd like to know more about. I believe you kept her in character - skeptical, flighty Susan.
You should continue; this idea is very good.
| LadyofLaughingEyes chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
It was really good. I would love read more!