Reviews for Snip
Fher34 chapter 1 . 8/8/2017
The Queen totally feels like a Rebecca lol. You're right.
Aww this was very cute. I like it very much c:
Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
Oh, this is so wonderful! From Rapunzel's complete practicality and lack of awareness that sitting on Eugene's lap might not be a good idea, to the way that he accommodates her, to the *really* lovely idea that she might never want anyone else to cut her hair but him, to his fears and insecurities that she soothes over, to hers that he comforts away, to the guard with the open door, and the queen—who is of course named Rebecca—this whole story made me smile and ache and love the characters even more. Beautiful.
katnipsc chapter 1 . 5/10/2017
I liked this piece a lot
Triscribe chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
A very sweet epilogue. ;)
EnsignAbby chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
That was very nice :) And you're right - the queen DOES look like a Rebecca.
Ads S chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
I totes get the whole thing about how some people are suited for a certain name. And Rebecca fits perfectly. Such a cute storyyyyyyyyyyy 3
kiriusgeorge chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
... CUTE. OH GOSH. That's all I could think. That was fantastic; you almost made me cry when Rapunzel started talking about Eugene dying. If you haven't already, I think a fanfic about the dinner conversation would be amazing... Please and thank you!
infiniteconstellations chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Teehee, my name is Rebecca. :) This story was so adorable, their moments while he was snipping her hair, oh god, SOO FLUFFY AND CUTE! The Queen is so cute, I could see Rapunzel doing this to her future daughter. Scaring her daughter's "boyfriend" (since they're not officially dating yet even though he died for her...) with the threat of her husband/Eugene. SOO CUTE!
Canon Archives chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Wow. This is exceptionally good. Most satisfying thing I've read so far in the Tangled fandom. Every word was perfect, absolutely beautiful. I wish I could explain how I feel more clearly this is wonderful, thank you!
ThankGodForJLaw chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Loved it, just loved it and need a sequel.
LunaEchoWillow chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Kuann chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I liked this! I tend to read "cute" fiction of this sort, and I have to say I wasn't disappointed! I think sometimes Flynn/Eugene was written as a bit of a softie in this piece, moreso than I think is accurate to his character. As an example, he gets rather teary-eyed when Rapunzel tells him that she never hated him for cutting her hair. I don't think the "real" Eugene would behave *quite* that way. However, I think this is just an opinion difference between the two of us, as Eugene's emotions were important for the flow of conversation in this story and this seemed to be a conscious decision on your part. That aside, I think Rapunzel was spot-on and I like the way you characterized Rebecca.

As for the premise, I think Eugene giving Rapunzel a haircut was perfect. On-theme with the movie (the whole hair thing), and it gives them time to converse. All good things there.

I think your style also has merit. Your sentences are, for the most part, clean and not bloated with adjectives and other unnecessary things. There is a flow to your writing that allows the reader to get lost in the story. I think there are a few sentences that don't need to be there (mostly those that describe the character's emotions). I say that because the characters' emotions are pretty plain in the way you write them, which is a good thing. Just be aware of that in the future; you write well enough that there are some things you don't need to explicitly state.

Overall, a very enjoyable short story. Job well done!
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Very cute.
PianoMan5 chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Pretty awesome story. So was Rapunzel sitting on Eugene's lap, both of them facing the same direction during that entire thing? I just wondered how they were positioned when he kissed her...
Kmdarkside chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
I don't usually read this type of thing (you know, repunzel and disney princesses(unless you count princess leia ;))) but this was cute and definatly worth the read. :)
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