Reviews for Portent
NCIS LA Girl chapter 4 . 3/17/2011
Luv this story but i was disappointed how Mia interrupted them! I mean if that happened to me wouldn't want to be alone but still Give mommy and daddy some time to play! keep updating i want more.
ForeverRK chapter 4 . 3/16/2011
I think Ch4 is my Favorite soo Far

LOL Awsome Job..Keeep Writtting )
NCIS LA Girl chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Love the beginning but would prefer a little more Richard Kahlan moment! keep writing!