Reviews for The Bits Box
Rabunga chapter 5 . 1/3/2015
You're right...someone should definitely write this story (but you can alway write the back story of how they ended up together!) :)
Naruto-junky chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Oh, please add this in somewhere! I read VOD and the ones before it. This would make the perfect comic releif. I don't think I have ever read anything quite like it.
Robin Grimm-Goodfellow chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
Well, obviously they survive, get married, and have a bunch of magical shifting vampire babies. Duh. ;-)
sunsethill chapter 5 . 2/27/2012
Goodness. That's not fair to end it there. I really want to see the guru take on the Ministry and the Volturi! The Volturi really need to die, well at least Aro does. Jacob would surely enjoy that! ;-)
Tlcatlady chapter 5 . 2/26/2012
Gah! I'm not a storyteller; I need more I tell you, more! TLC
lucidscreamer chapter 5 . 2/26/2012
Ha! Yes, that would make a terrific novel. As it stands, it's a tantalizing little teaser. Enjoyed it muchly. (Uh, you called Jacob "Jason" twice at one point: "Jason! Language!" Harry laughed even as he protested. Jason Black, on the other hand... Just in case you'd like to fix that.) :)
hotflower901 chapter 5 . 2/26/2012
I have been missing your words.
SilverLion80 chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
And THAT was only soft core porn! I can only imagine pure, full-blown hard core man-sex featuring Edward and Jacob (though I much prefer Jake, YUMMMMMMM!). I've been enjoying these. I don't suppose I could badger you for a bit from the 'Alternative Tournament'? I've been wondering whom else Harry may have encountered under the tutelage of Mary Poppins. I wouldn't say no to more naked Jacob either, mind you. Perhaps Jacob/Cedric/Harry smexiness? Pretty please with all three of them naked and writhing in whipped cream on top?
hotflower901 chapter 4 . 9/2/2011
Sexy and sweet...
hotflower901 chapter 3 . 9/1/2011
Thanks for this explation about why Poppy just overlooking Harry's injuries
Tlcatlady chapter 4 . 8/25/2011
That was a good little bit. the imagery was great! TLC
LynnGryphon chapter 4 . 8/25/2011
-falls over laughing-

I think the reason I find this so funny is that the entire time I'm reading this I'm thinking of my best friend with her husband and I know she would be just as unholy smug and irreverent as this. Hah!
sunsethill chapter 3 . 8/11/2011
I agree. This is one of the most glaring plotholes in the canon. Nice job.
LadyPhoenix731 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
truly a classic!
La Feu Eterne chapter 2 . 4/22/2011

Yes! Yes! You have envisioned my Utopia and brought it to life!

(Well, no, not really - mine involves a naked, /straight/ Cedric and Harry, with lots of chocolate, but you get the idea . . .)
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