|Reviews for Pokemon Ultima: The Story of SMOEU|
| Tanon chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
I give up. All your pokemon are so OOC. It's like you've made an original fiction and slapped some pokemon names in. That and the fact that Transform doesn't work like that. I'm sorry, and this may be a little flamish, but you have a lot to work on.
| Tanon chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
I'm amazed you put up 12 chapters with no one reviewing. That's perseverance. However, it's too hard to read. The weird formatting that you use makes it hard on the eyes, and most readers, like me, are too lazy to try and work it out. Fix the formatting, add line breaks, and you'll get more traffic to this fic.
6/10. Barely enjoyable.