Reviews for Flaps Its Wings
bantam-shine chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
I'm pretty sure I reviewed this on lj, but I wanted to review & favorite it on here, too. Le sigh. This story gets me every time. Brennan & the butterfly onesie, Booth panicking that she'll choose a donor, & their conversation about their future baby - it's all so lovely. :)
ti2ger003 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Please write more! I love a good baby!fic- but then, who doesn't? :)

And I'd like to see how Booth and Brennan get from this point to actually HAVING the baby. :D
sunsetdreamer chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
I am the biggest baby!fic fan of all time. You kicked ass at it (as if you're even capable of doing anything else) and I would be all on board for you continuing this on. Now I am going to stop being creepy and maybe do some homework, haha.

But seriously, this whole piece was pretty and I adored the ending (the quiet, kind-of-subdued discussion where they say SO much without using many words at all was their relationship to a tee) and I would pretty much be over the moon if you decided to go the B/B baby route. Just sayin'.
girlthatsaidno chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Please continue this. It is so hard to find well written baby!fic and I know for a fact you have the talent to make it amazing.
silly.chelley chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
DO IT! EXPAND! haha. followed u already. Im expecting to see ur story on my alerts. teehee. lotsa love!
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Hi there,

Ok! Wow! I have to add my name to the list of those who want you to continue this...please!

This was truly beautiful...and intimate and sweet...and everything you want for these two...I have a smile on my face that will not go away...Loved...

'He can't get the image of a pregnant Bones out of his head. Pregnant by some other man. Forever tied by another life to some anonymous person who hasn't earned the right to all the truly amazing things that make her Temperance Brennan'...

And could totally understand his horror at the thought of anyone else taking what should be his...his Bones...his future life with her and their having a baby together...

'And... you get to be the mom and I get to be the dad, and we do it all together...Every diaper change, every midnight feed, all those silly milestones we'll both get ridiculously excited about'...

And she is prepared to give him the time...'them' time...Afterall she had thought that there would never be a chance for there to be anything more than 'just partners' for them...Can feel both their hope...both their joy at the prospect...Love how Booth ran his hand gently over her tummy! Oooh! I am all gooey and did I say already that I have a big smile on my face...that will not go away!...

Please continue...loved this...

silver-wings124 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Really liked this! Please continue, it would be fantastic to read :)
nertooold54 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Definitely keep going with this, it sounds fun and sweet.
bostonlegalgirl chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Hello Miss eitoph... What a wonderful idea for a very LONG story... what I mean to say is you MUST continue. I loved it very much and would love to see how you would see it through. You also write our favourite duo very well. So as our Agent Studly likes to say...CHOP, CHOP! Let's get those fingers of yours typing away... PLEASE!
Fangirlofrandomness chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
I LOVED IT. It was absolutely amazing, your characterization of both of them was so accurate, and I love Bones, especially. (And Booth, of course, but Bones is usually the tougher of the two to get right, and Bones in this story was perfect.)

This came just in time, because with all the buzz about the Hodgela baby for Blizzard, I've been craving some BnB-have-a-baby fics :D

Minor detail I noticed - Bones isn't 35 yet - she's 30 in the 3rd season, so she's maybe 33-34 now. But doesn't really matter, in the grand scheme of things...

I'm really curious about one thing, though - who was the other donor Bones had lined up? It's not Fisher, is it? D:

Again, loved it! Please keep writing!
my-completeness chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Oh wow! Definitely interested in a follow up! Great story!
kris chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Okay I admit I'm one of those that never review but you should continue this. In just one shot you had me captivated
anon chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
I'm a lurker here, but this was really, really well done. You're a great writer, and I would love to see this story develop, see Booth taking the time he needs and eventually coming back to Brennan to start their relationship. It would be interesting to see how they did it...would they have a regular relationship and just wait and see if/when she got pregnant? Would they "work at" having a baby?
lolopop18 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
loved this story! are you going to continue it? please say yes! :)
nogigglingmajor chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Yes! Please expand this one! I love it!
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