Reviews for Harry Potter and The Phoenix Burning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this story 3 or 4 times now since it first came out and still enjoy it very much. It is too bad the sequel was never finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really imaginative and interesting story. I am sorry you never got to finish. I would have enjoyed seeing what differences Harry had made already. Thank you for sharing your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should have asked Harold (or Charlus) Lord Potter if Dumbledore was allowed to view his memories. The DMLE did not take a copy. Is your AU time traveling Harry Potter. Parselmouth? Does James already have the Peverell cloak? Why haven’t the Potters run a paternity blood test on Harry? Dorea Potter née Black is not only from a Dark Family, but she is the quintessential Slytherin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Third time reading this; I forgot how good it was! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much! Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a bad work. I knew because of the low word count (in comparison with other HP works) it would have a lot of rushed negatives. However as I knew they were inevitable, reading around them isn't too bad. Only actual negative I would say is that you had Harry's mindset reversed to a literal child. Not pretending to be a child in certain cases like other works, but literally having the mind of a child. It's pretty weird to be honest and its clearly allowed you to make the work exaggeratingly "angsty" which is such a bore to read through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the story. I really enjoyed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this story. The lighthearted tone of it, while also covering deeper topics, is compelling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the nice read, |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so well written |
![]() ![]() ![]() so wholesome that it hurts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! This is such an amazing story! I have read it multiple times now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH WOW? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHHHHH OMG, i mean yeah that sucks for Harry cause he have everything he wanted. To just be Harry, and suddenly Voldemort came in killing muggles looking for him |