Reviews for Kim Possible: Devil's Child Redux
GeorgeTobor chapter 10 . 6/7
Will Du wouldn't happen to have a niece or nephew Angela could date?
Someone lots, loads, light years more fun loving than he is of course!

I'm trying to think of ways to make is head explode!
GeorgeTobor chapter 9 . 6/7
Are Ben and Motor Ed related?
GeorgeTobor chapter 8 . 6/7
Somali warlords were mentioned in the first story.
Are they any relation to the Somali pirates we have?
Shutting down stuff like them can fill Angel's hero years.
GeorgeTobor chapter 7 . 6/7
Amy Hall.
DNAmy.
Could she be lured to the side of good?
If Kim's genes are not out of whack, or could be fixed...
And if Kim could safely carry a baby...
Angela might have a little sister to torment/train/take care of.
GeorgeTobor chapter 6 . 6/7
You handled the date, seduction, and sex scene with a flashback, great job!

Time skips
Flashbacks

They can be the best way to go on occasion.
Not sure how to handel a scene?
Blocked by the middle but you know the ending?
Just want to keep the T rating?

Skip and Flashback.
GeorgeTobor chapter 5 . 6/7
An android with fashion sense!
Annie needs a humanoid body.
Even if it is just one she remote controls.
GeorgeTobor chapter 4 . 6/7
Did you know that Denmark recognized same sex marriage first?
It is a northern country, chilly, have the honeymoon somewhere more sunny.
GeorgeTobor chapter 3 . 6/7
There are unresolved plot threads that you can tie up in the sequel.
The councilors who used Will Du against Betty in the first fic.
Gemini, who attacks in this story is not dead yet.
Angela's adventures as a cheerleader!

AND THE big QUESTION ... does Angel like boys? girls? both?
GeorgeTobor chapter 2 . 6/7
Will Du
Backstabbing bastard!
Send him on a suicide mission.

When?
Why in the next story in this series!

Angela in High School!
Will the world survive? YES!
Will Du survive? no...

How should he die? I vote for Gemini to kill him.
GeorgeTobor chapter 1 . 6/7
Wow the review count is low!

I'll correct that now.

Great idea, Shego becoming a mother.
The way it happened, rape, very much not great, not even close, if believable.

Couldn't it just have been a drunken mistake instead?
The guy could still have died, somethink Drakken did dooming him.

On to the next chapter!
Rebmul chapter 10 . 4/26
aw that was adorable
Rune Tobor chapter 10 . 2/2
Angela, only a hero?
No, think big, huge, enormous!
Angela should take Elizabeth's place as Head of GJ.

That should kill Will Du!
Simultaneous heart attack and head exploding!
DarXe chapter 5 . 5/1/2017
I've read this a few times and have meant to ask this each time but forgot ...
Shouldn't Angela be 10 now, not 12?
ThatGayDork chapter 10 . 3/15/2017
this was an amazing read I look forward to reading more from you
jwill21 chapter 2 . 8/2/2016
Lol love She go's attitude.
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